Chapter 3: /rolls all over because I cannot handle the hyuken feelzzzz/ ugggggh. So beautiful. Thank you ; ; (i love everything, that's all you need to know)
I was stoked to get a sequel let alone a third part holy crap thank you!!! your writing is so vivid! and hyuken is so playful and wonderful and even tho I'm partial to top!Ken, I still love this.
Chapter 2: I still can't believe you left me like this!!!!! where is the !!! sobs
Anyway if there's anything I love is Hyuk acting like the demon he is and ngl I think he'd be pretty forward if he truly wants to go after sth/someone? he doesn't strike me as someone who would around. Add the fact that he can actually torture them and play for a bit, then he's all set. The visual of him not letting Jaehwan get up while smiling down at him, pinned wrists, yes very nice.
By the way as another comment I have to say when you can feel the writer is indulging themselves in how attractive they find someone hahaha all of those comments about Hyuk, and you weren't kidding about making Jyanie suffer lol.
YOU BETTER STEP IT UP EVEN MORE THOUGH!! DON'T TEASE ME!! (ily thank you for always indulging ME with your way with words, people better recognise, etc)
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