Chapter 1: Oh my goodness, this was just adorable! *flails* I don't know what the prompt was exactly but this is probably one of the flat out sweetest oneshots I may have ever read. I was grinning pretty much the entire time and got all choked up by Taekwoon's insistence upon making sure his boyfriend had a white Christmas. XD Their relationship was just right for them and I loved how Taekwoon kept trying to hide his feelings/smile, even when he was with Hakyeon. Then with the realization at the end, maybe he won't hide it so much anymore.
But your inclusion of the 'gay couples in Korea' was a nice, if sad touch. Especially with the desire to have kids, but oh the snow children were lovely. And the snow lump Wonshik was just too cute. *flails* I normally try to add some sort of constructive criticism but this was just a pure delight to read. It flowed well, I didn't notice any typos (then again I was reading fast - I wanted to know what happened next!), and the emotions and descriptions came through beautifully. Though now that I think about it, the only thing I could have asked for more would be character descriptions. haha I didn't even notice it when I was reading, but even just bits of hair/eye color or snippets of clothes, etc, could round it out beautifully (granted I could have missed those bits too >.> lol).
Beyond that, excellent job and a lovely gift! Well done! :D
Waiiittttt~ You were also in the secret santa!? I didn't realise because I forgot to go through and look at all the gifts >.<
Ooh I'm excited and I didn't read any yet hahaha~
Wonsik is a snow lump omg I spent like a solid three minutes laughing over that, I don't know why I found that so funny XD snow children aside, this story is absolutely fantastic and a great fix especially after the super angsty one I just read ;;;; thank you for writing such a cute story~ ^^
Chapter 1: How come I'm only notice this masterpiece until now??? I was basically giggling like crazy omg this is soooo sweet and omg my heart >< this is such an amazing story :'(
Wow! This is fantastic. Thank you so much for writing it! The snow children akshflasjsnfoue. When I requested for the Secret Santa, I didn't know what I expected, but this is just amazing and just better than anything I could've imagined. Oddly enough, the story was published on my birthday. How cool! You are so amazing! This is so amazing! Thank you so much again!!!
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