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The Naming

Date: 8/11/2015
Author: Miechan
Story Link: Link
Reviewed By: nadahishamazzamXO

thanks to @Dreamingxoxo

Review

Title: 7/10
think that your title is rather plain. The Naming. Naming what exactly? I honestly think that you could’ve created a title that is both interesting and original. I’m not saying that it’s unoriginal since it’s probably the only fanfic on AFF that has that title. I’m just saying that you could’ve made it a bit more intriguing, the type of title that readers don’t forget and often mention to their friends. (E.g. Baby’s Breath, True Beauty, Know This Guy, etc) I’m not saying that you should change your title as it is already completed. All I’m saying is that you could’ve been more