Closure

Description

"You'd be silly to think that this will work out fine for you." 

That's all they'd been told. But they refused to listen.

 

If there was one thing they learned one thing from this experience, it's that things never work out when you force a relationship between friends.

Foreword

Hello hello!

If this story sounds familiar, it's my original plan for 'Can We Stop Lying?', but the direction in which the plot travels is different, the relationship between characters is different, therefore the ending is different. Also, initially, the story was meant to feature Jimin, but I ended up using Taehyung in CWSL because I thought maybe he'd suit the character change a little better.

Just rediscovered the Word document on my Mac, so thought I'd upload it as a short one-shot.

 

I'm also thinking about taking requests and doing a one-shot collection! 

Please let me know what you think! And which pairings you'd like to see... (P.S. I'm really bad at writing boyxboy)

 

Enjoy, love you lots

H.

 

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Liajiya #1
Chapter 1: I actually like this. Though heartbreaking it is less frustating lol
Aww jiminie! I can totally imagine jimin at the last scene /koalahugjimin
xchessthebest #2
Chapter 1: This was heartbreaking...... I have no idea what Suga did/said but I don't care anymore. "His interior had frozen over -- he no longer cared for the girl he once loved with all his heart," Ouch. That got to me. I felt so bad for Jimin in this but it's best that he let go because she wasn't really giving in the relationship anymore. .-. Yoongi would be a great older brother, haha.
FOR PAIRINGS I'D LOVE JIKOOK OR NAMJIN PLEASE ;-;
catshooter #3
Taehyung definitely fit the role better, great choice there. I loved your "Can We Stop Lying?" story.

Oh, for your one-shot collection thing, JUNGKOOK fic AND SUGA fic IS A MUST. I feel like Hoseok would go great with the angst genre because of his great acting that shows a different, more real, and depressing version of him in the "I Need U" music video. Oh my god Jimin's part where he holds his face, thrashing in the tub, and sobbing makes me cry every time. It's horrible, but I keep torturing myself by watching it again and again. ;w; ugh they're all so beautiful.
I also write but I at writing because I always have a plot but I never have an idea for how each chapter should flow to the next and it's so irritating uGHHH. I'm slowly getting there.

I HOPE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WORK! <3
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