Chapter 1: OMG, there wasn't even much plots and characterizations but I guess you just have this ability to make us readers glued into your story. And it pains me because I want more. You are a really good writer, I can tell from this oneshot and I think I'm gonna go read your other works. Good job! I thoroughly enjoy this!
Chapter 1: fluffy hunhan is best hunhan aaaaawwwwhiiiiiii. this was so cute. (tbh i dont know what snow is like, we dont have snow where i live) but when feelings about snow is described and written so nicely like this it makes me long for the experience. but anyway HAHAHAHAHAH established relationship hunhan is rly what i need in life, and for as much a brat as sehun is im just happy that he loves luhan, actually sincerely genuinely loves luhan even if he teases him a lot. i loved it when they were rehearsing luhans lines and sehun suddenly got up and said to find someone else. i wondered what couldbe upset him and it turns out it was about the violence scenes and i bet he was just seriously worried for his boyfriend. id be too. ahhhh but then those kisses at the glass window huhu so cute so cute so cute. and a little hot but ultimately very very cute. when sehun moves in with luhan i could only imagine how much better their relationship is going to be hehe thanks for this~
Chapter 1: your stories are great; your writing style in "how do you like your ramen?" and this one is so homey and comforting and i just want to snuggle up and reread them all day, but, sadly, there's an essay waiting to be finished within four hours ;; both of them weren't overwhelming in the drama or cheese department but were still satisfying, kinda like eating comfort food til your tummy's filled up just right- okay i admit that sounds a bit weird, but your writing makes me feel so cozy ;u; this story flowed so naturally and sehun's characterization was especially nice ^^ thanks for the writing this!
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