Ten Days of Bliss

Description

In which Jungkook is a famous painter and Seokjin is his masterpeice. ((A little Pinocchio and the myth of Pygmalion&Galatea reference))

Foreword

"Beauty is anything but the corruption of this land. The sesquipedalian lines in which authors and painters are able to control, similar that of a shamal as the Gods let the Archangels blow their shofar."

-Rowlange

 


 

In which this story has a lonely yet talented painter named Jungkook. His paintings are in museums and many acknowledge his art as one of the most beautiful and extraordinary. The young prodigy, however, wished for nothing but to experience love but nothing caught his eye. His ideals are out of this world. And that's what inspired him to pick up his brush and gracefully worked his magic. Manifesting the beauty he sees in his dreams. 

Warm yet lonely eyes. The gentlest shade of hazel. Fair, flawless skin illuminated under the moonlight. Jungkook admires the beauty at the tip of his brush. Well defined nose and lastly, plump lips with the slight shade of pink. Before he knew it, he falls in love with the beauty he created. 

Perfection.

Seokjin. Jungkook calls the masterpiece, he will be called Seokjin. A great treasure.

He keeps this masterpeice a secret from the world. Only for him to see. But as days go by, he falls deeper and deeper to the kind smile of the portrait in his room. And it leads him to make a wish upon a shooting star. He knows that it's impossible but he doesn't care. He lets himself drown deeper in the dream of holding hands with the beautiful creature. His great treasure. 

However, miracles do exist and shooting stars are magic as they say. Jungkook finds himself holding hands with his great treasure. Touching him and speaking with his masterpiece. He falls in love even more.

But not everything is as sweet as a cotton candy. Roses have their thorns. And miracles are bittersweet. In Jungkook's case, he only has ten days to spare with his miracle. 

 


 

Seokjin's name means great treasure in case you guys didnt know. I hope you will like this story. I'm not that good but please help me improve. I'm grateful thank you. 

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Rowlange
#1
Authornim here!

Sorry for some grammatical errors or incorrect spellings throughout the story, it's been a long time since I last wrote something so I may have lost my touch with the correct words. I'll try to catch up with the JinKook trends as well since I'm not too updated these days, so I apologize if I make Jungkook's character too exaggerating about the "Ohh! Seokjin's so beautiful, push him down the b--" wait what? No, this story doesn't have a mature content, I apologize > ^ < Anyway, thank you for those who upvoted and subscribed to Ten Days of Bliss! I'm working on Trafalgar which is a VHope fic related to this JinKook fic. And I'll probably be updating chapters of it once I'm done with this story. Since I've been having a lot of JinKook story inspirations, I've been wanting to write new stories but I need to stay focused on this fic. Which is why I'm writing a "JinKook Oneshots" fic to fix this problem of mine. Who knows when it'll come out but I'll try if I can find time.
ForeverJinKook #2
Chapter 3: I enjoyed the gradual reveal that this wasn't just a simple walk but also a confession of Seokjin to create the mood. Plus the way how they ran together created more of their bond to develop their characters which is really an entertaining perspective. The story, coming from Seokjin and Jungkook's POV but this time in the second person, is appropriately small and light, though certainly containing the sort of tension and concerns that what both characters would feel. I thought it charming, and rich with color and interest.
There were a number of missing apostrophes, so you might take another look at your possessive nouns like "thus, he glanced back to her" but above all, the chapter was beautiful. FIGHTING, AUTHORNIM!
haely13
#3
Chapter 2: Welcome back author-nim, when i saw the notification i literally freak!!! It's been so long and i have been waiting for a new chapter ever since amd now its here...
Thank u soo much
gyugyu658
#4
Chapter 1: OMG!!! I really, really, really, really, really love this story. It's absolutely amazing. I'm not exaggerating or something but... It's just... Wow... Your writing style was very good and I like how you portray Jungkook's character... I just simply liked it all. I hope you'll update this soon author-nim.
alexandra22 #5
Chapter 1: i love it!!! pls update but i dont want them to only have ten days.... PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AnnaRose2092 #6
Chapter 1: PLEASE UPDATE.. THIS IS SO GOOD. WAA. JINKOOK
ForeverJinKook #7
Chapter 1: Oh my god, is this a dream? I just myself. Holy , I love it!!! UPDATE SOON!!!! ILL WAIT EVEN IF I DIE-- MY CORPSE WILL STILL ARISE!!!!!
mello95
#8
Chapter 1: I love this!! Omg!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! >.<
sara1602 #9
I studied Pygmalion on french class and I loved it. I hope I'll also love this fanfic :)