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Author: kokonoona

Reviewer: Viviannguyen

Date: 19/11/2015

       

The Crazy And The Insane

Title - 10/10

The title matches the story really well. I was confused why you titled it that way until I read the story and found out it was a mental/psychological fanfic.

Foreword - 5/5

Although it's short and simple, it gave me the intense and curious feeling. The foreword makes me want to find out what's Taeyong talking about.

Description - 4/5

Honestly, I really want to give you a 5 on this cause you deserved it. Short one-line description but explained a lot. But the only problem is, you kinda gave out the plot by saying  "A love story between two asylum inmates, Seulgi and Taeyong.". To me, I prefer you not saying "love story" but that's my opinion.

Grammar/Spelling -14/15

I couldn't really spot any spelling mistakes... Either I read it too fast or you just don't have any mistakes... Anyway, there aren't any big problems, which I'm a bit surprised, since most of the fanfics I read have mistakes that're really visible. But one thing I noticed, "But if the inmate is aggressive, it can be dangerous not locking them up. That’s when the strain jacket comes in handy." I think