[R] - Rhapsodysiscaa

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

window

revieW

STORY LINK

BANNER ⬅

credit

TITLE: The use of the word " Window " is a good idea since it can be used to represent a barrier and metaphorically speaking, something you can see but can't touch. It is a good idea to have used this as your basis and idea for your story. However, I won't say it really catches my attention, as it is a pretty commonly seen and used object in everyday life but it does represent your story well. [14/20]

DESCRIPTION/FOREWORD: I personally liked your description. The use of personification on the Window was a nice touch. It makes me curious as to what had happened that nothing except for a see through object had witnessed which is a contradiction as humans should be able to see what had happened as a window is transparent. Since your foreword is only for the credits and Author's Notes, I won't review that portion. [16/20]

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

← Previous Chapter Next Chapter →

Comments

You must be logged in to comment

Azuremoon #1 Sep 1, 2016 06:06:48

Chapter 9: How do you make trailers?
I got the program but I'm not sure how to use it lol

Perssona #2 Nov 5, 2015 01:09:30

I'm just going to wait. Plus, can we use graphics for Fanfic Overflow too? I mean the credits will direct here...

susielovesblue #3 Nov 3, 2015 10:02:41

hey :) do you perhaps know when the shop will open again?

thanks !

MissMinew #4 Oct 29, 2015 06:33:16

Hello. ^_^
I just wanted to tell you that I asked my readers what they thought of the trailer and I just wanted to give you some of the response because after all I don't expect you to read the comments on my story. XD
So I've been told that they love the trailer, that it gave them the creeps (which is positive in this situation) and that it looks like a trailer for a real movie of some sort. <3

So once again I just want to thank you for creating a trailer that is so fitting to the story. <3

Mongji_chels #5 Oct 28, 2015 06:03:13

Hi ^^
I'm just curious as to when I'll be able to get my review?Thanks :)

BTS_Young_Forever #6 Oct 25, 2015 11:36:16

Chapter 8: Woah. Trailer looking good!! ^^

MissMinew #7 Oct 24, 2015 12:10:05

Chapter 8: I love the trailer, but the font at last that says Psycho is a little hard for me to read ): I like it I'm read but do you think you can somehow make it a little easier? Change the font slightly or something? ^^
Otherwise you captured the story perfectly! <3

Sarang_ #8 Oct 24, 2015 11:59:44

you guys are closed rn?

um how long will you be closed???

BTS_Young_Forever #9 Oct 23, 2015 11:49:35

I was wondering if I could get a Vhope cover made..? Its okay if you're busy :3

Swareece #10 Oct 22, 2015 12:18:46

I requested for a trailer ! It's okay if you're busy , take your time ! ^^