Luck of the lucky duck

My maid

"Alright, enough its my turn" Daesung said, making him get all of their attention. "Good luck daesung dont you loose" Top said "if you dare loose I'll kill you ( ͡ʘ ͜ʖ ͡ʘ)" jiyong added "damn hyung its just a game *whisper* ing erted little guy" "what was that daesung" "Hahah nothing hyung just saying, you look pretty * whisper* as a ing " "what?" "Your handsome hyung ,know seungri let's play"

"Okay, lords of luck of the lucking duck give me power *whispers* I'll kill you if I loose" seungri said. Daesung took a peak at seungri and then at the three monkeys "haaa I'm such a good hearted guy" he whispered "Ahhhh look hyung yg is outsude , I think he is coming to the house" daesung looked out the window "what??? Really." Jiyong said " potatoes and chips, too clean the kitchen jiyong clean the rooms " taeyanf said rushing to the bathroom "yes" the other two said "oh god, I should clean the living room" seungri added and started cleaning "hahah oh god, yahhh seungri I'm just joking he isnt here" daesung said

"I just needed time alone with you, come here" he added. "Are you serious, you made younbae hyung go crazy while jiyong hyung  and top hyung are cleaning, well I'm not complaining the house needed some cleaning" seungri said "hahah yeah but enough of that, seungri I'm ganna let you win alright so be happy, I'm Ganna throw rocks and you throw paper okay" daesung said. Seungri smiled "Hyungggggg" he said while jumping on top of daesung and hugging him. Legs on his sides and arms on his shoulders just like a panda "Seungri, are you trying to seductive me..." Daesung said "heyyy what happen her-" top stopped his sentence (•̅_•̅ ) "cause if you are its working" daesung continue and hold seungri from his waist and kissed him. "Yahh top what are yo-" jiyong stopped his foot steps (•̅_•̅ ) "you two hurry up an-" (•̅_•̅ ) "hmmn ngh d-daesughnm nghhh" seungri moaned "Daesung ((╬°∀°)" jiyong said "WHAT THE ARE YOU DOING " he ran up to them and yanked seungri off of daesung. He then looked at seungri and then at daesung " YOU LITTLE PIECe OF YG WASNT EVEN COMING WAS HE" He yelled at daesung "hmmm I don't was he I dont remember" he said shrugging his shoulders "(• _ • )(• _ • )" <-- top and taeyang 

  • "⁄(⁄ ⁄º⁄Δ⁄º⁄ ⁄)⁄ ha ha hah, daesung hyung k-kissed me" seungri sat on the floor touching his lips. Jiyong heard and looked at him "(╬ -´Д-)y ohh really I didn't know I mean I just stood there and looked at two idiots kiss, ((╬°∀°) and guess what that idiot told me the I was His favorite but he kisses another guy" jiyong said "h-hyung no that's n-not what it looked like daesung hyung j-just k-k-k-k-issed (///o///) me" "(╬ㅍ_ㅍ) seungri" jiyonh said, seungri looked up at him "y-yes" jiyong kneeled down in front of seungri and grabbed his chin "whose kisses better" he said and kissed him. Seungri was In shock once again and couldn't breath. Jiyong kept going and almost lost it until taeyang stopped him. "DAESUNGGG JIYONGGGG" He yelled. Jiyong looked at seungri and smirked, seungri stood there blushing while saliva was in His lips. "So seungri which one did you like more" jiyong said. Taeyang was so pissed that his kicked jiyong in the stomach while top was still dumb folded          (• _ • ) <-- top "seungri cherry lips,t-they  were dirty b-by some dirty mother ducking monkeys (っ ‾̣̣̣﹏‾̣̣̣)っ they my panda boy, my baby boy , the cherry lips he lost his ity" top said "Nnoooo <( ̄ ﹌  ̄)> I wasn't top hyung stop with your fantasy hyung" seungri said "You " youngbae yelled "your just jealous" jiyong replied "so what if I am" he yelled back "well you should be" jiyong said "well I am you " youngbae screamed "stop hitting me" "no" "yahhh stop daesung kissed him to" "hey don't get me Into this" "but you did and you liked it "well I won't deny it I did like it, But dont get me Into it" "well to bad you are In it" "daesung yaa you " "no wait youngbae hyung" daesung said getting darker, taeyang cracked his knuckles "yahhhhh stop it the three of you" seungri said "seungri ty got stolen away ohhhh noooooo ゚(゚´Д`゚)゚。" top shricked "I SAID TO STOP THE FANTASY HYUNG ( ⊃≧∆≦)⊃" seungri yelled "we are suppose to play a game not fight" seungri said "if we are not Ganna play no more then I'm going" he said and got up "hahaha t-thats right y-yoingbae hyung we are here to play a game, and its my t-turn hahaha bye (.`・﹏・´.)" Daesung said and went to seungri "you lucky " jiyong spilled out , taeyang cracked his knuckles and gave a smile "don't worry jiyong I have plenty to give the two if you" he said *D-Demon, he's a demon, oh god* they both thought, top kept sobbing. "Know let's play the game " taeyang said "y-yes l-lets play" they said quickly but not top he was to busy crying
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soleyjun #1
Chapter 7: Jajajaja so funny!! I love gri interaction and Bae reaction!!
shaylove93
#2
Chapter 7: Yayyyyy an update its been awhile, haha jiyong was playful and taeyang was scaryy hope you can continue to update :)
Rinnie1997
#3
Chapter 5: Your story is so lovely authornim
meg_vvip #4
Chapter 5: Haha their bickering is so cuute..love it!thanks for the update!
shaylove93
#5
Chapter 5: Bwahaha the panda lost lol thanks for the update
Ai_Fang90 #6
Chapter 4: OMG!!this is sooo cuute!!!super love this story^^
meg_vvip #7
Chapter 4: Haha this is sooo cuute..
shaylove93
#8
Chapter 4: Naughty hyungs and cute panda... omg loving ittttt :)
BinguTop4Life #9
Chapter 4: OMFG THIS IS WAS SO FREAKING HILARIOUS XDDD.

I'm dying trying to conceal my laughter rn because it's 1 am and my laugh sounds like a hyperventilating donkey so everyone in my neighborhood would probably wait up and be like " DAFUQ WAS THAT 0_o " XD .

With Top crying about Seungri's ity and how it was " gone " and Jiyong and Daesung heating things up while the forever alone Youngbae XD wants to beat the crap outta everyone I cried in silent laughter trying to be quiet ToT. I absolutely love what you have going on here with the adorable characterization and just the general plot....holy crap I wrote way more than I should've XD

BUT WHO CARESSS . I'll eagerly wait for the next chapter authornim , fighting ! I love the faces that you insert into the writing too , I can see them on each member and it's hilarious :D
NMInspirit987
#10
Chapter 4: WHAT THE- HAHAHAHA
I'M LAUGHING HARD AT DAESUNG AND JIYONG, TOP TOO LMAO THAT'S HILARIOUS!!
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! HOPE YOU'LL DO AN UPDATE AGAIN SOON!