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Taehyung doesn't know how to get off the ride.

 

 

Foreword

Prompt: "I was so focused on putting you back together that I didn't notice that you were ripping me apart and now my hands are cut and bloody but I'm not sure if it's from holding your broken fragments or mine."

 

 

WARNING: Undetailed ual themes, very subtle because I can't write . But really if you're under 12, look away. (I don't know if it should be in Rated M but if you think that it's necessary please comment and I'll mark it as that. 

Hey guys, I'm back with a Vhope/Taekook. It's not psychological like my other bts fics, so I hope you're not disappointed because this fic ain't gonna be as difficult to swallow as the others, so no need for explanation chapters or paragraphs, I hope. Thank you so much for subscribing or upvoting. Comment though, I really appreciate them, as ya'll know, I love them to death - they keep me alive. Constructive critism is also greatly welcomed. 

 

Love you all~

And have you all heard Butterfly oh my god it's half a song but a masterpiece already. 

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Squiggles #1
Chapter 1: HALLLLLOOOOOO IF U EVER NEED TO KILL OFF ANOTHER CHARACTER PLS FEATURE MY NAME THANKS
ARMYfeverXOXO #2
Chapter 1: honestly death isn't even that strange for me now anymore since I found u a few hours ago and now I have almost read every one of your storiess.. but i fking love all of them thank u for existing author
shinhaine #3
Chapter 1: will there be a sequel to this? i dont know, like maybe give taehyung a second chance to love himself more, like maybe he will be found and then rushed to hospital. everyone is shocked and grieving, especially jungkook, wondering where he did wrong. and then maybe he would talk with taehyung's friends from work and theyd tell him about his past relationship with hoseok. then maybe hed meet with hoseok along with jimin who would have heard about taehyung in the hospital and then jungkook would put two and two together.
maybe thered be anger in there that the hyung line throw jihope way because they thought everything is finally okay but they thought wrong.
when taehyung finally wakes up jungkook would be taking care of taehyung silently without a word. all the while he'll be only thinking about taehyung recovery and nothing else will be more important than that.

please please, im a mess right now and i just want them being happy, taehyung recovered, hoseok and jimin regretting, jungkook being strong and all them being friends pleaseplease

you're so so so great with this story, im not one with much taekook in vhope fic but this! this is just so ugh! im so happy i stumbled upon your fic when i googled site:asianfanfics.com vhope angst (hahahaa...)

thank you for this fic:')
Hoseokiss #4
Chapter 1: This was incredibly well written. Especially all the metaphors and descriptions.... This probably has to be the first time I'm not bothered by taekook in a vhope fic because I just want Taehyung to be happy...(*wanted) And I reallllly didn't expect what happened at the end and now I'm a mess and I have a test in a few hours so I'll just go and read some fluff (〒︿〒)
ellafrancesca #5
Chapter 1: Haha okay so throughout the whole fic before the ending i was like 'oh taehyung moved out, found someone else and finally he moved on.' And expected a happy ending with Taekook although i am not very fond of having taekook in a vhope fic but in this case, i'm all for taekook because hoseok is a big jerk buuut; HOLY SHIZ WHATS WITH THE ENDING LIKE WHY OMG I CANT EXPLAIN WHAT I FEEL- Yeah angsty fanfics dont usually affect me but had to cry a little damn. This oneshot is beautiful in so many ways <3 And the title fits the plot perfectly! 'Carousel' is such a fitting title! Now i'm worried how Jungkook would react when he finds out but lets just leave it that way- And idk but what you did to the ending was..how do i explain this; something that would make anyone speechless? If Taehyung wants it that way for him to be finally happy, then let him be. Oh damn you're a really good writer! And fudge yes i love this oneshot so freakin much! XD
RandomMaster27 #6
Chapter 1: Bruh.....Bruh......Bruuuuuh like bruh why? Don't answer that.
coal3sc3 #7
Chapter 1: Dear God. Dear. God. DEAR GOD. What even- oh my God. This was heartbreaking what the hell why am I even here at this hour I shouldn't have tortured my soul into reading this I should've waited at least 8 more hours so I wouldn't feel so broken after reading asdfghjkl :( That ing gif summarizes them sobs I thought the ending would be somewhat happy for Taehyung but I guess, that's the kind of happy he thought he needed. I wish to know what would happen to Jungkook after the death. I want to know what would happen to Hoseok when the news of the death gets to him. Would he feel guilty? Would it affect his emotions as it would /probably/ to Jungkook(since he loves Taehyung)? DAMN IT. This fic is so beautifully written I can't get enough of it. I'm glad you inserted a small scene of Seokjin and Yoongi that had made me laugh. Especially the text Yoongi sent to Namjoon about Seokjin XDDD I couldn't hold my laughter I imagined Yoongi and his face speaking the text out loud I can't even- HAHAHAHAHA XD Seokjin is so damn funny I just- LOL Anyway, this is such a masterpiece! I'm glad I've found it and read it :')
Squiggles #8
Chapter 1: OHMYGOD WHAT ARE YOU DOING YOU DIDN'T TELL ME TAEHYUNG WAS GONNA DIE WHEN YOU WHATSAPPED ME THE PLOT HELLO WOMAN OMG I H8 U GBYE
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