Like Music to My Ears

Description

Yoongi decides that maybe he's been pretty lonely without Hoseok

Foreword

Sequel to Like the Melody at My Fingertips which can be found here: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1012592/like-the-melody-at-my-fingertips-bts-yoonseok

This followup is dedicated to Alice, because she made me want to go write the sequel, and to Claire, who sat through all of my ing, helped me out with the plot, and assured me the lyrics i had to write for this story weren't crap. Also, Claire, whose brain i want to marry. ILY girls.

As mentioned above, I wrote these lyrics myself. I wanted to try and keep in the style of BTS but I probably failed at that. I hope you enjoy nonetheless.

I rate these M for the swearing by the way. Not sure if that counts as mature content so I do it just to be safe

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Blue82 #1 Sep 23, 2015 08:35:01

Chapter 1: I've told you before I'm in love with this AU. I love how you are continuing it. I can't wait to see how all the relationships turn out.

ilovesungyeollie #2 Sep 23, 2015 05:58:49

Chapter 1: oh im so happy you made a sequel!! and your lyrics are really nice~

Amalya #3 Sep 23, 2015 01:39:58

Chapter 1: This was sweet. I haven't read the first one but you caught my eye with the intro here and when I started reading, I felt inclined to at least finish it. haha I think you captured Yoongi being flustered very well and it was quite endearing to see Hoseok mothering/worrying about him. XD They certainly made a cute couple and the snippets of info you give us about them and their initial meeting were at least enough to help fill in the blanks of what a newcomer wouldn't know. The summaries of their previous encounters and relationships felt a little glossed over at times, but it was probably better to make them shorter so as not to draw it out unnecessarily.

For a song you wrote yourself, I think you did very well and it fits the overtones of the oneshot rather beautifully. Hoseok's reaction felt appropriate (I giggled just a bit at Yoongi's 'alarm') and then at the end... lol I definitely chuckled at Yoongi's tripped up response before he dashed into what he was trying to ask. It's simple and very minimal in its presentation, which is good overall. It feels like you could have added a bit more there instead of just the dialogue - it's almost like it's missing something/details - but otherwise, nicely done! I think the sentence of “You’re pretty inspiring. Will you…uh…” is throwing me a bit because he just rushes into it and you tell us but don't show us how he's feeling. Did he look at Hoseok when he said this? Was he holding him a particular way? How were they positioned in that scene?! It's a very important moment and I would have loved to have envisioned more of it. Beyond that, quite the enjoyable read. Good job. :)