Guys this is my first ever Fanfiction. Please don't feel any way to give me criticism!

Carmen is an 18 y/o female who lived in London all her life until her grandmother fell sick and they needed to move to South Korea to take care of her. During her stay there, she encounters many difficulties adapting to the new lifestyle and language but she meets this perfect stranger who she feels very gravitated towards. 

Cast:
Carmen Park
Female Lead
Categorized as cute but not beautiful, tall, neutral toned complexion, long black hair and average body size. 
Very bubbly personality and likes to make everyone happy 

Park Jimin
Male Lead

Supporting Characters-
Her parents
Her grandmother 
Kim Taehyung
Kim NamJoon
Min Yoongi 
Jung Hoseok
Jeon Jungkook 
Kim Seokjin