Chapter 1: That was beautiful. I like how you portrayed Jongde, his tsundere only look at me bish kind of attitude. What I loved the most was that pining tho!!! Joonmyeon's thoughts and repressions made me feel things. Kinda got teary eyed while reading haha. Also, I loved how you had he explanation by the end, it made everything click and ended the fic smoothly. Thank you for that wonderful story and sharing it with us! I hope you have a nice day because you definitely made mine better ?

Chapter 1: It was really good and I appreciated how realistic it was. Definitely a wonderful read, thank you!!!

Chapter 1: Oh god, i dont know what to say but seriously, this is so so beautiful ;;; i love how you write jongdae and joonmyun, and even krystal. too beautiful for words. this story should get more love ♡♡♡

Chapter 1: i came back to re-read this and was flooded again by all the emotions. it's such a beautiful piece! it's a little bittersweet in the best sort of way and i've fallen in love with this all over again

Chapter 1: IM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS AND GASPSPSPS YOU WROTE MY FAV LAYSOO WHERE YIXING WAS THE MAGAZINE PHOTOGRPAHER (i read it on ao3) AND I JUST AM STILL CRYING YOU ARE WONDERFUL

Chapter 1: wow! you did a great job. I really like your idea and how you described Junmyeon & Jongdae's characters. Truly beautiful. Keep the good work up!

Chapter 1: I love the amount of detail you put into the story, the unique setting, the progression of the relationship, and the passion between the two.