What a Beautiful Mess This Is

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Do Kyungsoo hires a cleaning service for his mess of an apartment. He expects a middle-aged cleaning lady, he gets Kim Jongin instead.

 

Foreword

 

 

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He can smell Jongin's cologne, musky and heady, and Kyungsoo fights the urge to lay his head on his chest to take in more of it. And though he's done, his thumb shamelessly lingers on the curve of his cheek, tracing the smoothness of it. His eyes follow the angle of his jaw, the shape of his chin, to the captivating redness of his lips and God help him because all he wants to do is to lean in and have a taste. He looks up to see Jongin staring, eyes burning into his.

 

Kyungsoo swallows the sudden lump in his throat because he realizes he should pull back, move away, he's already crossed the many lines he'd drawn around to protect himself. The familiar twist in his chest is what snaps him back to his senses and  he hastily removes his hand but neither of them step back.

 

 

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Hi !  

First time posting, first exo fic, first chaptered fic (a lot of firsts for this one) and i haven't written in years so please be kind to me. *twiddles fingers nervously*

PG rating for now, possible rated chapters near the end.

Constructive comments are highly appreciated so I can improve.  :)

Btw, this was written like a sitcom, hence the scene transitions all throughout the fic.

 

 

EDIT: (07/31/2017)

THIS GOT FEATURED HOLY HOLY CRAP  ;__;  i'm so emotional rn   i never ever thought this would happen  ;__;   thank you to everyone who've supported this fic, you don't know how much this means to me. I love you guys  <333

 

 

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mapotofu #1
Chapter 26: ♡♡♡
peniruplastik #2
Chapter 25: I'm literally crying with the proposal. I have a weakest heart when comes to proposal, its just so deep and menaningful. Especially it was Kaisoo proposal, it feels so surreal. What a amazing ending. I'm so happy. :')

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Ballerina_Belle
#3
Congratulations on getting featured!
ONEOFAKIND345 #4
Chapter 25: ❤
ONEOFAKIND345 1 points #5
Chapter 25: ❤
Lariat95
1 points #6
Chapter 23: My mind went straight to Lim Hyunsik even after you gave us the last name XD good to know who the guy actually is, now I can properly redirect my death threats
tincanbrianna
1 points #7
Chapter 26: MY HEART IS LITERALLY SO FULL AND IM CRYING FROM BEING SO HAPPY THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AMAZING PIECE OF LITERATURE ILL PROBABLY END UP REREADING IT BC ITS SO BEAUTIFUL
EXOSVT8
1 points #8
Chapter 26: OMG, nooooo! THIS KAISOO FIC IS SOOOOO GOOD, it made me fangirl so hard that my parents thought I was possessed. Not gonna lie, I spent my nights reading this ficould, along with othersome. But yours was my top priority. Now I'm dissapointed because I finished reading it.
How have I not seen this beautiful fic? Somehow it was hiding in my 'To read list'
jeongcheolismalifeu
1 points #9
Chapter 25: AWEEEEEE I JUST FINISHED READ THIS STORY AND THIS IS SOOOOO ADORABLE, GOOD ENDING, AND FLUFFY AS IT'S FINEST! LOVE THE M CHAPTER TOO~
These_Nocturnal_Eyes 1 points #10
Chapter 25: And it all started with a dirty apartment. Nice story :D