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#squad : pledis entertainment's new girlgroup / apply now!
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  name • position • status insert review here, alright, mkay. forgive me since i do reviews pretty long. mistakes will be put in bold. eheh.     shina • maknae, rap, dance • chosen
hi there, it's my character shina. i know her talent twin is lime but her face is really cute and lovely(z) sometimes people can be unexpected.     anna • vocal, rap, dance • accepted
matching icons. kyakyakya. it's not that matching but whatever. i love matching icons uwuwu. hello there, aeli! thank you for being the first applicant to this applyfic. let's start the review, shall we? i love that she's caucasian-korean! the non-existent s and kind of cracked me up, so brownie points for you! the personality was pretty detailed and easy to understand so thank you for that. i also loved the cute little captions before the trivias. i see mina and their ship name is shinna, aw so cute! and i see that yuju was written as yuna so can you fix that, please? and the 'diss god' in yoongi's part was so funny i'm. taehyung as love interest! i love him, aha. the history was so creative! and the crossing hand part made me just 'jdjfsjdfsjdf.' but anyways, just that one minor mistake (it's stupid for me to put just that as the mistake omg.) and you're free to go! but since that's just a minor mistake, you're accepted! thanks for applying! xoxo.    
milk • performance leader, dance • pending hello hello,  ayana! let's start with your review. she's thai-chinese, i'm screaming. we have so many foreign applicants screams. and the understanding and pronounciation part, that's so cool. thank you so much aha. i actually liked reading the personality even though the font color was changed into an automatic color (really forgive my ocd omg) since it was divided into those on-stage, backstage, deep down. your background was brief but understandable. and moving on to the trivias. the likes and dislikes should be minimum 5, so can you add atleast one more to the likes and dislikes? and the way seungcheol and sinee first met was omg ; u ; so sweet and adorable. ugh i get jealous easily ripriprip. even though you had some spelling errors, just those likes and dislikes and you're free to go! thanks for applying, dear!     clover • performance leader, dance •
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#squad! - okay everyone, i beg you to add shin mina somewhere in your app. and plus, reviews will be coming late since midterms are coming!!

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WishUponARose
#1
Hi~! I add the like and dislikes that you asked for~!
penguin23
#2
Chapter 3: thank you for the review!! And I fixed what you mentioned and bolded what I added in so you can find it easier!!
raptordino
#3
Chapter 3: alright, thank you for the nice review! haha it's okay. i notice my spellings but idk which to fix.
i hope it is okay for you. good luck!
-baymax #4
Chapter 3: omg yein my lovelyz bias
gtg apply omg
penguin23
#5
Chapter 2: I can't wait to apply!!