Came to me a while ago, and I figured I'd post this short story for you guys :) Enjoy

The Hive contained probably the most magnificent society in the unknown world. Its people were technologically advanced, no one ever went hungry or bankrupt, and the majority of the population lived comfortably under the protective laws of the Queen and her Soldiers. Some of these laws were strict, however, the citizens of the Hive understood it was to protect them from the chaos and dangers of the above-ground world, a world we called the Canopy. Anyone that was

hey guys ^__^ so i planned on making a thing on just tips on how to write a good story, but i decided to turn it into a fanfic :) hope you guys enjoy and if you want just a thing with tips then tell me cuz i might make one and feature all these other peeps in it and stoof