My hands are here for you to hold, my shoulder for you to cry on and my lips are here to tell you "I Love You"

right now I'm work on a story that's going to have these lines, please give me some advice, is this ok? or should I change it? (I keep up with the line my self)

I use to share my stories but people just made fun of me, so i'm a little scared to share my stories. I just hope that when I share my stories you guys or girls would like it :) <3

I grow up in a broken home, I was bulleid for being over weight and people would call me ugly. I have about 3 good friends they all make me very happy when I'm aroun them, They were the only people liked my stories