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                           турісаl тееиаgея 

 [ Human ]X- Chromosomes ] [ Vietnamese ]Heteroual ]

[ I'm in love with the Pretty Boy Company ]

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Hello dear readers, and profile roamers

I'm probably quiting AFF.

Maybe once and awhile I'll come and maybe even update

my stories but until then expect little out of me please.

I'm sorry to my readers who want me to update

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About Me

 

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I'm not the type of person to get mad easily, and I don't really care if anyone reads my stories or not since I put them up for myself and anyone who wants to read, (mostly myself so I can save them for later because I have computer issues all the time....)

I'm not the kind of person who demand comments or view cause personal that doesn't matter. Some really great stories don't have many subscribers and view and what matters is that I enjoy them for the author's writing style, characters she/he uses and the way they use them, and the plot.

What I don't like is plagiarism, I absolutely hate when plots, or just the whole plain story is taken from someone with out credit. Just ask the person to use the story line and make it your own story. Don't try and sell it off like you thought of it yourself.

Original story lines are the best. Stories that have a twist of some sorts are great. Typical story lines are good but since there are many story like so there won't be many readers. I'm not saying I don't have a typical story line for my stories, because I sure do. It's the way you make it your own and personal for the reader.

You stories. ____ is something that I dislike. I have read a few of them and the stories are amazing but that line or sqiggle just kills the flow of the story. Any story can be a ____ ( you ) story basically. I usually imagine myself as the main and that way ____ makes the story more personal and sometime I enjoy it more then if I don't. Cause come on who wouldn't want to be surround with great-looking guys, unless ____ don't swing that way which is fine with me.

Me: Stories like this also are impersonal. Although I do believe that if you create believable dialogue then the story is already headed to a great place

My theory of writing progression.

Stage one, Scripted style. I  started this way, not everyone starts this way but I'm just going to put this out. This is basically just what the characters are saying to each other. Nothing is really described and many symbols are uses. 'Thought' *actions/thoughts' :Speak

Stage two, Scripted plus detail. This is the next stage where it is the same as the first stage but where the setting falls in and the place of being is described as in, 'The hall way as freezing, her fingers where cold and her teeth chattered away like it had a mind of its own' then ending with the character Me: Gosh it's c-c-cold.

Stage three, Scripted writing ends. This is where the author now used more text and describes the story unlike the scripted stories. Although some stories will still have some script in them it is very few. Not much is written still since the author is still in progress of learning to write more. "Chapters" are about 1 - 1000 or so words. Usually choppy and usually doesn't flow as nice.

Stage four, Well written. This is where I lay in the chart of progress, because I have to say, reading other pieces, mine is just not good enough to be placed any higher than this. The story had a good amount of text, described. Scripted is not used unless for 'texting' or 'online chats.' "Speaking" Thoughts sometimes, actions are written out.

Stage five, Wonderful story line, well written, long stories. This is where I would like to be. Great vocabulary, grammar is great, length is envious, spelling is checked. Story line is original or written off every well.

Stage six equals go pulish a book. If you write this well I envy you so~ much, I would probably tell you to go publish a book because I probably would go and buy it well as long as I know you wrote a book.

Whatever stage you're on. I encourage to continue and write because writing should be for yourselves and not for the reader cause yes it is nice to know other people like your work/stories. And just because you don't have many readers or subscribers or comment doesn't mean its a bad story. If you like it continue to write. I keep it there and later on when you become a more better writer you can go back and say "Wow, I use to write like this?" and you can see your improvements from way back.

Hmmm. . .  I shall be back to edit this!

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                           турісаl аятisт

I'm a y editor and I don't have fancy programs but I think I do pretty well.