I am just wondering but do you buy upvotes?
The standard of English isn't really high and ur way of writing isn't very smooth so I dun understand how this story can have so many upvotes
On the other hand have you considered getting a beta reader?
Chapter 10: OH the angst. If Luhan and Sehun would communicate effectively they would realize that if they just stayed in contact that things would be better and no one would have to let anyone go to be happy. ^.-
Chapter 5: Haha... Dragon and Luhan fight. This chapter was cute. I'm glad they are getting to go see Tao and Sehun. I hope things turn out good. Don't worry about being fast with your updates. Sometimes, real life takes over. I know how it is. I have two stories and one request one shot I'm working on at the same time and I have to pace myself or I'll go insane. So, take your time.
Chapter 1: It's not crap. I'm liking it so far and I'm a picky reader. I don't care if English isn't your first language. I can still pick up on the emotion and work you put in to it. Have confidence in what you do. You can only get better. ^^
Just a word of advice, your story has been floating around in some hate/critical blogs around AFF. Find someway to undo your mistake to prevent your reputation from being tainted even more.
Chapter 17: oooh poor sehunnie though, he feels so unsteady, like really. I know he thinks about the future and all but like Lu said he should just live for the now. Lu doesn't need to feel jealous, although I can understand the reaction.
Take your time, no need to rush things. Good luck with your exams ^^and fighting authornim~~~
Chapter 16: Hello author-nim!
First, I know I said that I will give my feedback if the story is done but I couldn't do that anymore. Why? It's because after reading the whole 15 chapters yesterday night, I can't contain the emotion I've been keeping for. In just first three chapters, I couldn't hold back my tears. While reading your story I was actually listening to the BM you used as well in the trailer. My head also spinned like a roller coasters last night because of non-stop tears. Maybe it was the fact that your story had a deep emotion and meaning in real life, based on a true to life story. I was just wondering what will be the next chapter now that in real life they are only ot9 who actively doing their activities and schedules. I will recommend this in my EXO Stories (Recommendation)...
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