Chapter 33: Wuuaaa this is so amaziinnngggg
I like the plot very much, and the epilogue is soo unexpextedly, they're already have a son, huh ? Kkkk
Nice story, authoorrr
Keep writing (งˆ▽ˆ)ง
Chapter 3: Your story was absolutely bravo, but i think you need some editing on how you write it? Some are confusing for me to read. But yeh nice story you got here.
Chapter 35: I thought this was a super interesting story and I really enjoyed it. Only one criticism though, the last chapter seemed kinda rushed? Like he falls off the cliff is that right? and then it jumps to the epilogue. I feel like there should be something to wrap up the main story a bit more. But other than that, great story!
Chapter 35: Wahahahahahaa
Finally. I thought he would really die. But i don't really get it why kai suddenly had draining alice when at the first he was so great and powerful with that fire alice of him.
oh and I hope i got to see hana's alice more tho
Chapter 33: I'm a fan of Gakuen Alice, I've read the manga, it was amazing but the ending was awful T.T I'm glad you didn't make the same ending though the story was slightly similar to the manga. Good job authornim!!
Chapter 15: I really hope that she getting what Kai is trying to do now, it's so frustrating!
And I feel like Hana and Jaejoong are related or something, and I have a bad feeling about this Jaehyun guy...
Chapter 33: AAAAHHHHH im done reading ;; it's so beautiful :') i also liked the ending :) one of the best fanfics ive ever read <3 the plot is so unique and unpredictable ^^ im sad it ended already T.T tho im happy that Kai's still alive and that they even had a son <3 GOOD JOB AUTHORNIMMMM!!! Thankyou for making such a wonderful story :')
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