Chapter 36: I loved it, but I felt that the ending was a bit rushed. Like how did he survive the fall, etc u know, but apart from that I loved the rest hehe
This is one of the best supernatural, fantasy fiction I've read. Finished it of in a day, that's how addictive the story was. The story is pretty unique as well~ thank you creating this story, author-nim!~
Chapter 34: I just found your story last night and guess what, my sleep had been stolen by this magnificent plot of yours! I have to say, your story is one of the best plotted supernatural stories I have ever read. I am serious, I'm a very picky reader. The storyline isn't heavy but still packed with suspense, a little bit (cringe-worthy) fluff here and there, comical scenes which brought the smile upon my face (e.g the hot spring, lol) and the tension in few last chapters which got me tremble in excitement. Amidst that, I have to admit that your way of typing confused me at times (e.g the absence of full stop in dialogues) plus some mistakes on gender (e.g you put 'her' on Kyungsoo's parts) but those are forgivable! Overall, I found this story amazingly plotted and it's a loss if people don't read it! I'll be waiting for your spin-off to complete since I extremely hate to wait. Till then, see you!
P.S your trailers are awesome. I can't wait for the spin-off to be completed!!!
P.P.S sorry for the long comment. Heh.
Chapter 1: Oh my god I just found this after reading Turning Pages and I went totally crazy after seeing that it's inspired by Gakuen Alice (which is one of my favourite animes of all time and I still unconciously sing the theme song sometimes lmao). I can already imagine Kai as Natsume and Hana as Mikan *o* was kinda half expecting Kyungsoo to hold a bunny like Ruka did in the anime but regardless I'm so excited to read this!
Chapter 6: hello author-nim, i like your story but sometimes it's confusing me because you put their conversation in one paragraph. for an example, you wrote it like this:
"Where are you going?" Hana asked. "None of your business" He replied, making his way out of the room.
instead it should be written like this:
"Where are you going?" Hana asked.
"None of your business." He replied, making his way out of the room.
you should put enter after Hana's part finishes.
and i don't know if you forget to put full stop or you indeed never put full stop, but you jave to put them before the quotation mark.
for an example: "That jerk... he's getting softer inside."
after the word 'inside' there should be a full stop.
but overall it's good. i like the plot and the way you explain things. thanks for dharing with us. i wanna read the next chapters ^^
Chapter 36: wow! just finished reading the story :) :), i really didn't stop reading this until i reach the end! OTL i love this story :) :) it somehow reminded me of an anime entitled Gakuen Alice :) :) i would like to read the spin-off! i am sure it would be a lovely story :) :) *thumbs up* good story author-nim :) :)
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