Chapter 2: Alright let's get down to grading...
Title and Foreword Page- 5/5
I gave you complete marks, the idea for adding the reviews by poster making shops was original, as well as the fact that your story correlated to the title. Perfect.
Plot, 50/50
I can't believe that I cried over this story. It sticks with you and that is very touching. Your original ideas added flair to the story that made it seem as if these 'idols' were people. Legitimate people who weren't just pairings . Also I appreciated how there was no hint of an overtly ual relationship as most authors would do, it was mostly a mental and emotional connection between the main couple. This was a very beautiful story.
Flow and Execution 20/20
The flashbacks were timely and a valid and important part of the story, the transitions were spot on and I didn't have to wonder what was a real time conversation and what was a flashback.
Spelling and Grammar 20/20
No complaints
Appearance 5/5
The simplicity of the story required no frills or decoration, the words did the work. You kept decor to a minimum and that was greatly appreciated.
All in all, not susprisingly 100.
Well done you!
Chapter 2: OMAIGHAD HELP HELP HELP HELP ASDFGHJKL WHY U NEED TO FRIGGEN DIE KYUNGSOO WHY U DO DIS GAHD AUTHOR NIM WHY U DO THIS I JUST CANT--- /ugly sobz/ CRYING SO HARD RIGHT NOW THIS IS JUST ASIKXNNCJRIDNSNFJE /jumps off the cliff/
Okay whoops, sorry because I acted like...that. ANYWAYS THIS IS JUST SO BEAUTIFUL~~~~~~!! I dont like angst that much because they make me cry, but this is an exception, I mean, who won't like this story? I mean like seriously, this is just like unicorns,flowers and people pooping rainbows and barfing at the same time (what?)
/claps/ dis is just fabulous, I liek it, me likey so much, i just cant explain what I feel right now TT^TT
Chapter 2: I didn't cry at first. But I still felt sad. Then, after a few secs I think my heart was broken into pieces. Why the hell kyungsoo should die?! So sad TT well, at least jongin still alive though he acted a bit crazy~
Chapter 2: Oh my-
it- it was an amazing story i've ever read! When i was reading, i feels like i saw what happened. And idk but i feels like watch a very sad movie! It's really-
It's not enough of words to explain this story. You srsly made me cry a river! This fic is really unique, interest, and original. Omg I love
OMG!
This is amazing!
Sorry I didn't read it immediately!
I was surprised that I am in "Author note."
But this work is amazing! You made me cry a river.
This is one of the best Kayes
Will you let me translate it into Russian?
Thank you for this story, it left a deep impression.
But I have a question)))
Can I talk with you personally?
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