Chapter 2: This one shot is a total masterpiece. It's so beautifully written and is so eye opening! I admire your writing so much! Thank you for keeping her nameless as well. It was, like you said, much easier to kind of connect with her since she didn't already have a personality in the beginning, keeping her from being her. She just...unfolded as we read. Thank you so much for writing this.
Aw this story has hit me in so many ways. The ending.... The bittersweet fact that you meet so many people in life,they may be the ones that created beatifilul memories with you but they're just passerbys. They come, and they go . But i guess thats just life..
Chapter 2: Cried on the first chapter. I can relate of wanting to suicide. The events in the first chapter, it's so sad but the fact that jongup has woke up, it had me in relief. This oneshot was great.
OMG this story is so good it made me cry so much. Thank you so much for such a great story. It blew my mind. I would love to read this again and again! You did a really good job in describing each character! Reading this story made me think what would my parents and siblings react if I were to kill myself. I do have depression and I am afraid that one day I would succumb to depression and take my own life.
Chapter 2: As a mom, there is plenty to be addressed in this story.
First, Bullying. In my country, it is against the law and heavy penalty is imposed for students bullying their school mate. It is a universal problem I think for all schoolers around the world.
Second, Lack of communication for the parents and their children. I think parents should reach out to their children and try to understand that their children are unique and they have their own lives to live. It maybe hard for the parents but, this is the new generation and I guess we parents should make some adjustments for our children.
Third and the most important thing, Suicide is not the solution of the problem. I guess it is just being coward and it's a form of running away and turning your back to it. We humans differ from another animals in that we have the power to think what is good and what is bad and thinking of suicide is an animalistic behavior for me. Life is too short and we have to enjoy what life is to offer for us. Lastly, prayers make miracles even if the world is against us.....
Chapter 2: ... It's really well written . I can somehow relate to the characters . One of my relative attended to commit suicide too ...Really meaningful and beautiful story !
Btw congrats on being featured ;) !
Chapter 1: Wow. Just, wow. I can't even describe how this made me feel. It just reminded me of how awful someone must feel to take their own life, even though her brother didn't do that, but she was willing to. But it still makes me sad when people taunt to the point of jumping or doing something to stop it.
Thank you for writing this, I really really love it ~
My classmate also tried to commit suicide a month ago. We didn't suspect a thing. The day before she jumped from her apartment, she was still attending classes and interacting with her friends.
I always wondered what the hell goes on in people's heads when they try to commit suicide. I always thought that problems can always be resolved and no amount of failure or sadness is worth dying for. I guess there are instances when only death can bring peace :/
Honestly, I don't like reading stories since I rather write than read, but this plot sounds so good and Sehun is my bias, I'm all for deep, dark plots since life isn't always full of glitter and rainbows. I just want to say by the description of this story or one shot, I can see it already on the AFF main page. This looks so promising! P.S. I chuckled when I read your little note at the end, lol time to edit to "congrats for getting featured!" cause I have a feeling this story will be <3
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