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AllFourSeasons
#1
Chapter 2: This story completely flipped my mood.
That's how much a good writer you are. You're able to change moods in an instant, one word describes so much, but use so effectively that it eventually just changes how readers view point is like.
I will always love your writing and all of it is just indescribably amazing.
I applaud your writing with full satisfaction, because I love it.
velvetmajesty
#2
i just want to ask. sehun's tattoo is put there by the royals, right? or he's the one who put that? wait, sorry. my instinct there is that the royals put the tattoo on him. and like jongup, they are forcing him to jump. omg, am I right?
flipflopxx
#3
Chapter 1: Aw I envy your skill of writing... You really can write well! I wish that I can write like you :'( Honestly, I'll take your story (especially this one shot, it's my favourite now) to improvise my skill of writing. I hope that one day, I can make my story, alive like yours :)
skinny_syoo #4
Chapter 1: This is the saddest ending ever...T.T
yeollshin
#5
Chapter 2: Omg I can't even hold my tears ㅠㅠ
so, this is story about sehun.. and Nameless (and Jongup too?) .. I think I'd like 'Nameless' so much. I'm really curious about her. About her life after Jongup wake up. About her life without Sehun. But this is the ending about them? To be honest, I want to know more about Nameless, but I'm too excited to read the story with the ending like this. It's interesting. So much :)
CatInTheBox
#6
I still can't get over this story. My favorite one-shot.
overdoseofexo #7
Chapter 2: OMG I FINALLY READ THIS AND I UNDERSTAND SO MUCH NOW DEAR LORD. SEHUN'S TATTOO AND HOW HE LIKES SOMEONE ELSE AND HE WAS LATE TO GO HOME
Tuvshu #8
Chapter 2: Such a beautiful story...
creamcoloured-
#9
Chapter 1: When I reviewed, I actually cried. It was like Ailee in Imortal Songs 2. It connects with the audience, I felt the need to comment this since it was 'beautiful' It deserves to be featured honestly. I've been reading ur How to Lose him in 10 weeks and Royally Screwed. Keep writing! ^^ Btw my mother walked in on my crying and she got shocked when I said it was because of a story. XD
cheara #10
Chapter 2: It's feel so real-painfully :" and one word for this story: beautiful :"

Thanks for created this story
aidanayla #11
I cried. A LOT. That was utterly beautiful. I literally gasped out loud when I read that Jongup was awake. It was a bittersweet ending and I loved it to pieces. I am actually in the middle of reading Royally Screwed and just passed the part when Sehun said he hated Sora. Back to the main story I go! Thank you author-nim for this beautiful piece of fiction. I beg you to not ever stop writing. This definitely deserves an upvote!
annisaaprilia0404
#12
you really are the queen of angst stories!!! every line makes my heart break, every paragraph makes my heart flutter. thank you so much for sharing the story :)
lunette
#13
Chapter 1: This story was amazing! I actually preferred this ending compared to a happier one, because it fits so well with the angst-y theme. Though there was one part where Sehun was talking about his dad leaving, and he let slip his name to nameless. Was that on purpose?
parkchora
#14
Chapter 1: Wow! I loveeee this story so much. It's exactly the kind of angsty story that I love to read! Gosh, you're such an amazing author!
maiquie24 #15
Chapter 2: Wow. Just. Wow. Your story is just great. Even thought it's quite long, it was great. I will recommend this story for my friend to read!
twinkjongin
#16
Chapter 2: but this is great though.. the kind of angst that i like.
uzz006
#17
Chapter 1: This is very good!!! Great job and I feel like I don't need a complete fill in the hole story to seek this fic through. We've all experienced hardships and encountered similar situations in life so everyone can relate to these two. I'm always a er for slice-of-life writing and you've done a fantastic job with this. Anyway you've mentioned a sequel, which is a word I love to hear when it comes to great writing; however I am actually satisfied without one.
ninety4
#18
this is amazingly written I must say. it's probably the best one shot I have ever read.