Chapter 4: that was incredible!!! i love the concept and the bonds of the sire/aegis relationships. (but if you hadn't included the author's note at the end i would have been pretty confused lol... guess i didn't read close enough!)
Chapter 4: I cant help thinking how it must be hard and so sad for The Supreme Leader's other aegises Lay and Kris to share Zitao; how it must be so heartbreaking seeing Zitao mostly with Luhan? (I know, I know I am over thinking things, Im a er for angst, Im sawrey lol) Dang girl, I would kill a couple of cockroach to know how Zitao revived Luhan and what happened after that ㅋㅋ. (I cannot- in any way- get near and much lest kill one, okayyy)
I didnt see that coming that Zitao is the Supreme Leader here, I thought it'll be LayxLuhan seeing how the nameless Supreme Leader revived that rose, I was even so convinced that they are granted to have a child that is Tao because what can a Supreme Leader cannot do when he is the Supreme Leader, righttt.
The ending is perfect! But I can still say that I would kill 3 cockroches this time just for additional chapters for Aegis or a sequel or drabble series or.. Okay, Ill shut up now...
...But wait! Are the Supreme Leader's aegises Luhan, Lay, and Kris allowed to cherish each other? Given that they all have the same genetics... are they also destined for one another? Are they also allowed to interact (and ually interact) to one another?
If Luhan is living with Tao, then is Lay and Kris living with them too? Given that they have this big house?? These are some of the few questions swirling around my head right now lmao
Its a pity that Kai here needed to die first before Kyungsoo could unleash his inner beast :( But of course its his character and its the story flow and just at how I said earlier, its perfect! How the characters and the story like.. fell in their respective places.
I still think that earth is the greatest power out of the cool powers there is. You go, Do Kyungsoo!
I was just mindblown by how awesome this story is! One of the best ones I've read in a long while. The writing style, like how it's not dragged out, and how there was already so much love even in that brief period of time they met, but it wasn't portrayed in a superfluous way. Also there were parts that made me go 'woah! go kyungsoo!' And that unexpected plot twist in the end, I was just getting ready to sob myself to sleep because luhan did that to kai and ughhhhh, just thank you so much for that happy ending and for writing this *throws you confetti*
Chapter 4: Wow. You got me speechless for like, 1 whole minute. This story is beautifully written. I can't help but feel awe after reading this perfect masterpiece. You made my imagination run wild. I can actually watch the scenes in my head. You're a really damn great author. This story will be one of my favorites! Congratulations! Hope to read more stories from you.
Chapter 4: Have I mentioned I really love this? Like so much, so much? I've re-read this before and well, now again.
I sooo love it. Aurgh...you have no idea how much.
Chapter 4: I THOUGHT IT WAS TAO LOL but i kept thinking like whoa the supreme leader is a baby panda wouldn't this be too comical but oh well his powers are to die for so...
THIS IS SO GOOD AND KAI LIVED YEHET.
Chapter 4: <3 <3 <3 I love this so much
So good really, you did a great job in writing it. Even though I know that their aponants were other EXO members but still I wanted them to kill them it was so thrilling hehe :D
I can't even urgffff....
MAMA! AU + Hunger Games! AU is the best.
And can I say that even if I know Luhan is soooo evil here, I still think my bias is so HOT *-* He's like so asdfghjkl yummyy! And I thought he would make an appearance, since his ability is so powerful (like I read in this book where the girl has telekinesis too and she moves herself to FLYYY!!)
Chapter 4: Can I just say that I love the way you write.
Not only this story, but all of them you've written (I've read them all).
You always take the extra effort into meticulously describing every character and object's appearance and of course, the setting.
The way that some of your words flow is so beautiful that I can't catch it on just the first reading, I have to read it over a couple of times to actually understand the beauty of it.
You really make it so that the reader is able to see the story, not just read it.
I'm amazed by all your writing and hope you continue :)
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