Chapter 4: i was about to cry my heart out as i got close to end, like this life and this stupid tears (T_T) srsly i never can handle and KaiSoo sad ending it just kill me inside. thank you for sharing
Chapter 4: I started tearing up when Kai died. I just WHY! I was just so angry/upset and then Kyungsoo went all badass (kinda) and killed Luhan so I felt a bit better, but then you just had to remind me that Kai was DEAD! And in actual fact that they lost because they can't ever be together.
I was sniffling when Kyungsoo is back in his apartment and he just breaks into horrible sobs and then the (The Supreme Leader knows everything.) part and I was like you Supreme Leader, it's all you fault. And when Kyungsoo goes into the hospital room and it's empty I was so angry! Like how dare you but then Kai's actually there, he just used his powers. I hate you for making me go through this emotional wreck of a story but thank you for writing something so beautiful and sad.
Chapter 4: I almost started crying when luhan ripped kai's heart out tHE TEARS WERE SO CLOSE TO FALLING AND I WAS YELLING YOU AUTHOR OVER AND OVER AGAIN BUT YOU REVIVED HIM AND I ACTUALLY /DID/ CRY FROM HAPPINESS YOU CRAP basically I hate you for what you made me go through hate!!11 you!!11!!
But honestly, this is one of the most beautiful fics I have read in a really long time. I love the development of their relationship and how cautious and dubious kyungsoo was at first but then kai kisses him and he kisses him slow and he kisses him deep and then kyungsoo dives into love head first and the next thing you know he's thinking of spending his infinity with jongin and it makes me so emotional I've fallen and I can't get back up ;-; AND THE WHOLE HUNGER GAMES ESQUE TOURNAMENT THING WAS GOLD the scenerios and the powers and everything- especially how you paired up chen and junmyeon, their whole strategy was really smart AND HOW DID KAISOO BEAT LUHAN AGAIN?? godammit
Basically I love this /so/ much I'm just going to go and reread this and relive the pain and fluff huhuhu this is such a great fic and i'm so glad I found you ;-; /maniacally raises number one fan foam finger/
Chapter 4: Lol i thought lay was the supreme leader since the rose gt healed and yknw how lay has the ability of healing .. But anws this was a great story!! Short but nt rushed! Really enjoyed it!!
Chapter 4: Going on a reading rampage on all your fics and ugh I can honestly say how glad I am to have found you because of how beautifully you write and how exquisite the plots you manage to conjure up are.
Chapter 4: I'm speechless at how perfect this fic is. In 4 chapters, the story has ended. But it feels like a 30 chap story. Fantastic storyline too. Made me cry :) hwaiting!
Chapter 4: WOOAAAHH OH MY GOD TT^TT
AND I WAS SOOOO DEVASTATED WITH KAI'S DEATH THAT MOMENT...
YOUR FINAL TWIST WAS ONE OF THE BEST THINGS I'VE ENCOUNTERED IN ALL OF THE KAISOO FICS I'VE EVER READ.... SERIOUSLY
even Luhan and Tao's role.. I've mixed them up..and the way you've made good use of their powers til the end..it's just so amazing
And I'm still crying up until now for all the things that happened in this last chap.
I never expected such an ending...... it's just sooo good that words can't match up with how great you've made it.
*showers you with KaiSoo hearts*
Thank you so much for writing this wonderful story~
And I look forward to your contributions to KSP 2014 too!!!
THIS TOTALLY FILED UP MY KAISOO DOSAGE!!!
Chapter 3: I cried so much on this chap...because BaekYeol's also one of my favourite OTPs and that they can't have their happily ever after here...
And it's frustrating but that's how the game goes and I figured they'd end up fighting each other at some point..but still...
thumbs up for the fight scene!!! i was on the edge at every part of it... wondering what attacks next...which pair would win over...
And I guess Kai's secret weapon made a big impact too!!!
God the schemes this leader.aish. ugh my KaiSoo please make it through!!!!
Chapter 2: AGAIN I'M GOING TO SAY THIS...
I LOVE YOUR CONCEPT OF AEGIS ><
the Armaggedon does reminds me of Hunger Games yet its so different in a sense that you made use of their powers from Mama Era and that of the aegis concept..the sharing of powers and the rules of the game...it's a way different experience~~
and I feel bad for SuChen being sacrifices here..but KaiSoo tops all so yeah...
Your words made me feel so much angsty emotions here..the feeling of uncertainty... the passion..the desire to escape... to buy more time for the two of them... it was an intense flow and though my heart aches I'd still keep on reading... I'm going to see this through ><
And I'm glad Soo's able to save Jongin at the last minute...i was screaming my lungs out here ><
Chapter 1: It took me some time before I started reading this one >< (I've subscribed ever since I saw your name added on the KaiSoo Project 2014..sadly things got hectic when classes started especially since it's my thesis year... so yeah.I'm able to read this just now...I need my daily dose of KaiSoo TT^TT )
the first chap held so much story that I feel like drowning on it in a very good way...
I love your idea of aegis and how they're made for their counterparts...
And i absolutely love those first moments where Kai hasn't spoke yet but was able to relay so much to Kyungsoo... actions really do speak louder than words..
And Kyungsoo being all embarrassed and mock-angry oh my gosh shy Kyungie is such the cutest thing!!!~~
And the way you use words..they held so much that it makes my imaginations run wild here..to that point that I could clearly imagine each scenes ><
And yeah so much fluff too and my KaiSoo heart is overflowing with so much feels~~~
ugh! I'm such an idiot! I was so worried about the ending that I jumped directly to the last chapter to see if the protagonists died (I wanted to save myself the heartbreak) and ended up READING THE FRIKKIN' SPOILER! -sobs- It was a death tournament and I really really wanted to read it but I didn't want to drown in angst especially after works like "Hunger Games" "Divergent" & "Battle Royale" and fics like "48 Hours". The good thing was I saw that they lived :') but the spoiler, ugh THE SPOILER!
And then the supreme leader and his little troupe turned out to be my favorites too Dx (Chine line rocks!) I heartily felt sorry for Baekhyun and Chanyeol, especially after we got a little input about them too, otherwise honestly, I wouldn't have been much effected. There was a bit of a sting on the death of the participants, mostly b/c I already am an EXO fan and I already am bonded with them.
One thing that really amazed me was the new way you utilized their supernatural abilities. That made the battles really interesting, and since I have a really vivid imagination, so much visually exciting and pleasing. I've read a bunch of mamaAU and the way you made them use their powers has been the most unique so far. The story stands really strong and engaging even without the M rated scenes and that's what I found to be one of it's brilliant aspects!
I saw a fanart once in which Kyungsoo was sitting on a washing machine with Jongin standing between his legs and my mind instantly shot to Aegis x_x 'das what we call STRONG brand recall :P
Somebody here please make a movie on this! *:・ﾟ︵(✧ ヮ✧)ﾉ*:・
(btw, I discovered that you also authored 'Iris' :D When I read the summary I thought it was going to be humor but -oh my gwad- all that strain on my head! Surprisingly, I ended up liking the side couples more than the main pairing, b/c HunHan was good comic relief & BaekYeol had a precious history. I'm limited in words here so I can only say how much I enjoyed reading it)
Chapter 4: I thought Tao and Luhan are both aegis. ;-; I certainly did not expect that. After rereading though I just felt like banging my head on the table. The sitting on the mahogany table and sitting on the tea table parts were such dead giveaways. I can't explain my feels. T^T
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