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cloudsFLY09 #1
Chapter 27: Omo! I think I just going crazy reading this..i love chanyeol huhu
frozen_tears #2
Chapter 31: This story teared me up.
-2Mirae-
14 streak #3
Chapter 32: This story is really good!!!! Can't believe I finished this in one day!!!
Hisgurl200 #4
Chapter 31: This is the best story ive read in my life and to tell you to be honest there arent alot of good stories that a written on AFF that are this affectionate. I have cried multiple times and almost wanted to abandon this story once i figured i was going to start crying and have a stuffy nose. But then i coped with it and ended up loving it. Also learning a lesson of love too. Now i see love in a different way. This story that you wrote opened my eyes to the reality of the real world. How people dont always get who they desire and how they always seem to be blinded by obsession. I know who ever that is reading this comment will be judging me and all that im am crazy to say all this when clearly this type of story already exist in the world of films. Being honest here i dont really prefere watching the films so i read them instead. Not that i dont like it or anything but its just that i feel like theres something left out and its the emotion that was left by the author in the writing. Id rather read the story and experience the emotions running through the authors head in my imagination which makes me realize that all these emotions i suddenly feel while reading this story can happen to anyone at anytime. And feeling these emotions just makes me want to cry. A word of encouragement from me...please keep up this great work and im sure youll be a famous author....i have never written a comment this long before soo basically this story that youve written made a huge impact in my pov of life.
Elizabethguppy #5
Chapter 32: it was so beautiful it made me teary..lol
white_pearl90 #6
Chapter 31: Beautiful story...thanks for this roller coaster journey...
lovekiller_tsuna
#7
Chapter 32: I love Sehun~
The end.
krystanned
#8
Chapter 31: Finally after three days I can finish reading this story. I love how the story turned out to be. You have to know that out of all the story that I've read, this is the best one because you really taught me so much about love. I can't find a better author than you who describe emotion perfectly in every single moment that happened in this story. It felt like I really can understand what the characters are feeling and I thought for a second I was the one in the story. Thank you so much author-nim for making this undeniably good story. It has been an amazing roller coaster ride. Well done author-nim.
Deannn #9
Chapter 8: oh my god , your story is so damn good !!!!
haruniatia #10
Chapter 31: I love your story, author.. I felt touched and at the same time learn so much from this story. The plot, the characters and the storyline are so good. I'm enjoying your story so much. Keep it up
sehunutella #11
Chapter 30: You should make soojin and soorin story separately.. Their side story are way different and it will be nice if you make it more detail.. I know how soorin feels, but many people hates her even your reader hahaha.. People should try to be in her shoes and experience being substitute or back up plan.. I think their mother (parent) are a bad parent for loved them unequally.. And once again soorin will always be the bad guy here because she state her true feeling.. Soojin got brain, loved, beauty, attitude, perfection, yet she feel unhappy because she cant express his thought even to her sister and parent, how more ridiculous it can be.. It's her own fault not to express it tho.. She seems like ungrateful person.. Think conclusion comes from different side of the story btw
Reena7
#12
This is my 5th time reading this n the feels r still there,this is still my no.1 evn though i hve read this ovr n ovr again i still cn't help my tears esp. that part where kris told chnyeol to prioritize soojin ovr evrythng else at chnyeol's aprtmnt i really hve a soft spot for tht part. Tbh i cn't get enough of kris and soojin n the epilogue was not enough for me n was hoping for more lovey dovey,sweet moments.
binbinnn #13
Chapter 30: this is such a good story! you did a great job author-nim!
binbinnn #14
Chapter 7: ok i dont know why but i just dont really like soorin #sorrynotsorry
binbinnn #15
Chapter 3: wait, so soojin died?
Nimi098 #16
Chapter 31: Thank you authornim.. Your story had a great plot and make my curiosity enabled till the last page. Fantastic! Hope to see more good stories from you. ^_^
coffetea
#17
Chapter 32: just notice this omg what have I been doing in my life? k-- too much, I know! gotta go clicking the page! adios!
psikwita #18
Chapter 32: I'm gonna read you other stories when i finish my exam inchaalah .
psikwita #19
Chapter 30: I'm going to cry finaly finalyyyyyyy . They are together . i have a mixed feeling when i read this story realy and anger was always there hhh XD . I'm happy for them
psikwita #20
Chapter 26: Aghhhhhhh WTH she want him and she is doing this . SOMEONE KILL HERRR ...