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keuraewolf
#1
Chapter 31: I really really love this storyyyyy! ♥♥♥
And i'm glad they all got their happy endings.
springjichu
#2
Chapter 31: I just have to tell you that this is awesome xD
I was skeptical at first bcs im not one for dramas. But im glad I decided to read this oh God this is so beautifully written I read it in one go♥xD
thank you for the great story♥♥♥
Galaxyboo_
#3
Chapter 31: Gah gah gqh gah gah!!! Im so so so ha ha ha p p py!!! :D
Im glad the ending is AWESOME! Love krease love sehun wohoo
Galaxyboo_
#4
Chapter 27: No...you are true authornim :)
We dont see his sadness cover by his coolness right? No matter how and what kris do i always support him bcuz he is the reason im being exo-l so when he out... I just keep looking for his new filem and so in... Kris need fans to support him not blaming him i agree with u authornim!! Give me five!!
Galaxyboo_
#5
Chapter 23: What the helllllllllllll!!!! Authornim im cry hard bcuz of this story!!! OMG ITS HURT !!!! !
Galaxyboo_
#6
Chapter 5: you kris!! Youre evil!!
AeChaPark #7
This story is beautiful. It talks about how painful love can be and what love can do to a person. I love the how you made the characters. The plot twist (plottwist isn't the authors name for no reason) are really good. They spice up everything. It is really pleasant to read that it makes you think how you act when you are inlove. I love the build up of the story, how it progress and the flow is simply beautiful. I like how you made Sehun's character always slap the main character's head for them to grow and think through the situation. Also, I love how wonderful and pure Kris and Sehun's heart are in this story, they have different minds yet they are both think amazingly towards their love ones. People might think that Chanyeol is stupid and an (which he is -in this story) here, but who can we blame? He is inlove and I love the fact that he still think straight even though it's a bit too late. Soorin for me is the "Pathetically-in-love" character for me. She's like the victim that always wanted to feel love that she fails to notice. I like how you made her character really nice. And Sehun is definitely perfect for her. As for Soojin, I hate how smart she was yet she's too stupid sometimes. I mean, i like how strong and how she stick to her words but sometimes she needs to think about her son first and not just her sister.
There was just some confusion I had way back in the 1st half of the story. Luhan's fiancee? I was really curious because it got mentioned before but was not really in the story. I guess i just expect that there will be a moment for them. Also, Jongin and Krystal.. They have this thingy blossoming on the side but it wasn't mentioned after some time. But that's fine coz, they aren't really the main ones here.
Anyways, as for what i've said earlier I love this story. And I might love you too :D Great job!! Congratulations and Thank you for sharing this with us. :D
hellroses
#8
Chapter 31: This story is amazing thank you for your effort and everything i really loved this
Angelz0715 #9
Chapter 31: This is a really beautiful and meaningful story. It teaches a lot about the meaning of love ^_^
sellasella #10
Chapter 31: Thank you for writing such a meaningfull stories but still sweet and light. I hope there are K drama prducer out there who interested to adapt this story ( wonder why lot of k drama scenario feel ridiculous and impossible, while here in AFF we often find such a good written stories ). still waiting your Enrapture, authornim...
xoxo1401 #11
Chapter 30: We meet again lol i cant stop reading thiss:p
hunndeer140
#12
Chapter 10: The characters are just so intercorrelated with each other. But I like it. So, ain't nobody got time for that.

I think that I like Sehun more than Kris. Don't judge me, I just find his character something that I like. All of them clearly have flaws and I don't know what would happen to Kris.
beauties #13
Chapter 31: oh my GOD!! I really love your writing authornim :D <3 <3
and im totally agree with you that the second lead man deserved to be happy too
what a wonderfull story ^^
thank you authornim
reuwharnns
#14
Chapter 31: This story totally amazing. Salute. No words to describe how amazing and beautiful it was. Love it sooo much
hilmaars
#15
Chapter 30: wooow. just wooow
tsaaqib #16
Chapter 30: woooaaahhh this the great plot story that ive ever read... deabakk authornim... four thumbs up to yooouuuuu....
tsaaqib #17
unintended uninvited but i think your story must great!
thereisaplace
#18
Chapter 30: Omg. Thank you for making happy ending for all of them :') I'm so touched when I'm finished reading this fanfic. I see you slipped some life lessons that we could take from this fanfic. The sisters bond. The meaning of true love. The obsession. The sacrifice. And the "don't judge a book by its cover" lesson. I thought Soorin was selfish because she didn't want to let go of Kris but I knew the reason why she did that,she's been through so many hard times in her life..she used to think that her own sister was the one who had everything and had a very happy life. Both Soojin and Soorin sacrificed something important in their life;freedom and feeling. Thank you author-nim,for making this story^^
thereisaplace
#19
Chapter 20: PARK CHANYEOL.BE AWARE BECAUSE I'M GOING TO KILL YOU NOW