Chapter 6: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is the beginning of me shipping them. I was interested in how you were gonna make gangsters actually into nice people that still beat people up but you have me believing it now. He seems like he has reasons. Seriously love the MC and now I love Sehun and now I love them TOGETHER. I love how he teases the MC haha.
Chapter 5: There are a few errors here and there but it's okay in general. So now I guess she's popular because she's smart, pretty, and nice? It doesn't make sense for her to be popular only because she's smart anymore. And I'm glad this school is diverse like a normal school with different types of people. Haha I guess shock really does get to you so that she was more surprised than scared of the guy. And then pushing the guy off her? omg this girl. But I like that she has flaws.
Chapter 4: I really like the first part of this chapter. I'm glad you had her properly traumatized instead of those stories where the girl would have been all "I don't even care because I was saved by OPPAAAAAA". And ha! I should have known. Soo Jin is smart enough to do something like this even though she has no filter for . Take THAT Sehun! And I really like the thought you put into the conversation.
>"Did you think we were that stupid to accept the check?" "No." I kind of lied.
That part was really funny hahaa.
Chapter 3: I'M SERIOUSLY IN LOVE NOW HAHAHAHAHAHA. So she's popular because she's always #1 in academics? At my school, the smartest people were really well known though I wouldn't say they're popular. But I like it. This is seriously amazing haha. Sehun seems to have good reasons for when he beats people up. That one boy is so stupiddddd. $430 for shoes for his girlfriend???? I really like the MC's character. She doesn't think before she speaks but she's kind hearted and she endearingly lacks common sense, which makes sense since she's so book smart. And her friend's funny too. She acts just like us readers because she laughs at everything Soo Jin does hahahahahaa
Chapter 2: Awwwwwwww I was totally correct. It totally does work in an endearing way and it really does showcase her character. I'm really happy she's not those bland spineless MCs but she's not fierce enough to have good comebacks and she's not just the stereotypical nerd haha. Why do I feel like Jaehyun likes her? Like maybe he's that elementary school kid who thinks teasing your crush will make them like you. The MC's thought processes are soooooo cute. "stab me with a straw now" LOL she's so funny! And the part where she is more surprised by the fact that he knows her. I can picture Luhan and Sehun standing up menacingly with their arms crossed hahahaa.
Chapter 1: I like your writing ^^ It has a lot of personality in it. Sometimes, it gets a bit cluttered because you're trying to show every single thought that this character has, but I think it kind of works in an endearing way because obviously this is the type of character who acts before she thinks and thinks a million things at once. It shows her character so you don't have to tell us. Looking forward to reading this! I hope it isn't super cliched.
Chapter 7: I am sorry chingu, I am just leaving a coment after I read your long fanfict. Your fanfict is great, I like your linguistic. Although I am still learning English but I can't understand it well( maybe)
Chapter 39: Dear Authornim, I'm just wondering how many erts are there in their neighborhood. While Soo Jin has quite a strong character and mind and intelligence, why doesn't she do something to stop herself from being victimized?
Chapter 45: i really like your storyyyy...i think i will lost interest like other story i read but you story make my eager up ...i like that character^_^ ^___^^^^^^...thumbs up for youu..,and now i will read your seqeul...^_^..and i think the plot is more interesting..^-^
Chapter 45: Wait. I'm still curious why Sehun called her girlfriend the entire time. I was thinking because he already liked her but denied it in front of her and then in those times, his true feelings came out, plus it's fitting/convenient for those fight scenes, and also because he wants to believe in the lie he told his grandpa? It could be all, none, or a combination of these thoughts, but this is the one thing that stuck in my mind the entiee time I read this.
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