Chapter 1: The story is really interesting. I'm curious about what will happen. BUT, just in the first chapter I've already get annoyed. There's so many " who am I kidding?", "jerk", "stupid", "godness", "okay" and the same phrases over and over again just with different words. In my honest opinion, the character SHOULD NOT interact with the reader. It's weird. But I'll give some credit and keep reading because the idea of the story is something that catch your attention. Please, don't get me wrong. I'm just giving my opinion. <3 fighting!
Chapter 45: i just finished it within 4 hours ! author-nim you such a brilliant . i just love this fic so much . it so cuteee and it make me crying haha and the ending is too cute . please do write more . i will love to read your fic more
Chapter 14: this story is great and im just half way through it! good job author! i really like ahn soojin alot, she is dumb sometimes but smart when needed lol anyway this story is really awesomeee!
Chapter 45: u dont know how stupid i look whenever i squeal during their kissing moments! this story is like a Big Ball Of FLUFF! i needed to bite my lips to stop myself from screaming! and right now their bleeding..lol...and when i read this chapter i was seriously crushing my sister's bones...hah~ i finished this in one day too~ and i cant help but to scream 'Baekyeol'...lol(?) i luv this dayum ff so mush! you are so mothertidbits awesome! //throws candies//
Chapter 45: Oh and I honestly love u to death author-nim . I have subscribed to this story for a long time but I just found time to read this . I first starting reading this at 11:53 PM & am done with this story at 5:31 AM . Lol good job !
I finished this story in two days! Waaaah! Jinja, no words can describe how much i enjoyed reading your story author-nim :) I will always be subscribed to this story because it's deffiinately a story I want to remember and keep on my favorites list! You did an amazing job, and maybe hopefully there will be a sequel to this? :) thank you for the awesome story, I once again enjoyed my time reading this. :)))
Chapter 45: WAHHHHH! I finally finished this story! It was a great idea to extend her acceptance towards Sehun, because, like you said it would seem rushed. At first reading this story, I was thinking "DAMN SO MANY CHAPTERS WILL I EVEN FINISH?!" but now that I have reached the end I wish for it to continue XD how ironic right? Well, Author-nim you did a great job, and I like your style of writing, and if you continue to write more fanfictions, I will be more than willing to read them. LOL why does it sound like you invited me to read your fanfic? omg, but anyways, I will read the rest of your stories, I hope they are just as amazing as this fic.
Chapter 45: Finally manage to finish this story omg >< such a beautiful and heart-warming! Soojin, everyone who read this story can tell that she's just idiot and know nothing about love but I found late that its cute, I love their first encounter its like sehun was really mean to be her guardian since the first>< oh and yes sehun was the most gentleman yet also cutie boyfie that everyone willing to be with, I love his protective side omg reading this story make me think maybe dating gangster was not that bad idea (lol) oh gawsh I'm sooosoooosoooo in love with sehunnie bcs of your story! There's a lot amount of emotions that you try to share in this story but it was just so amaizing,wonderful, this one of my fav sehunie fic :'))) pls keep the good work author-nim! Fighting~^^
Chapter 45: Okay. This story was sooooooooo beautiful! It made me go through a rollercoaster ride of emotions, one of them wanting to strangle and just pull all of Soojin's hair. And I totally want a boyfriend like Sehun, or better yet Sehun himself! Hahaha Anyways, I want to thaaaank you for sharing such amazing story to us. Good luck to your future stories! Kudos to you Author-nim!
Just by reading the foreword got me super hyp already. I got this feeling that this story's gonna be oh-so-awesome!. HY! can't wait!!!. kyaaaa Ta ta for now. ^.^
Chapter 45: Im usually a silent reader but i cant help but to comment. This fic was one of the besy best fic ever!! ♥ If theres a chance, please make a sequel. I would really appreciate it. Once again, thank you for writing this amazing fic.
Chapter 12: why i feel that sehun is right.. soo jin is DUMB.. lol
sorry but she is genius but why she always so dumb and idiot to follow people around and the end she end up being beaten..
Chapter 45: aww.. finished it in one day!! the ending was the BAM. i would love to have a boyfie like oh sehun ; so manly and cuddly at the same time. srsly i rather date a gangster if its like him. i really love this story. i was laughing and falling inlove. and there were times i wanna sob or just stab yoo ra with a straw. lol. its a perfect blend of different genres; action, romance, comedy and drama. so exciting to read.
for soo jin's characterization, i found her like one of those "mary sue-like" girls. shes literally been crying in every chap. but somehow shes understandable. shes just a girl stuck with grades and some erts and gangsters suddenly bombarded her life. i bet even i would look wreck-er if that happens to me. shes a girl who over-analyze things and yep kinda an idiot when it comes to actual action. i totally agree with sehun. how come she excel in academics but an idiot at the same time? wasnt her just like me.i also sometimes excel in exams but lacks at practical application ugh. i love jung ah, a bestfriend to keep. lol i cant believe that she seemed have a crush on jae hyung tho. omg. speaking of the devil, im glad hes being open-minded and all about sehun and soojin. i really think hes an awsm of a person. like cmon, if it wasnt for him at the first place, our "lovers" wont cross path with each other. i also love soojin's comical-like but lovable parents. YES, you can adopt me. even im not a boy, but oh well..
for yeol,baek,kai and luhan!! love them too!! theyre good friends of sehun. i really love everything about this story!! i'm really going to miss it. im glad its a happy ending tho. i hope sehun will not get tired protecting his oh-so pretty girlfriend!!~ one of my favorite fics!! thank u for writting this!!~ ♥
ps: i still dont get why soojin was seemed ert-ahjussis-magnet
pps: why people seemed always to know where's soojin is or what shes thinking. even yoo ra knew shes hiding behind a dumpster. creep creep
awsm chap. i have also thought that maybe sehun has a tracking app;; he always know where soojin is. quite unsettling XD oh yoo ra, please let it goooo. ur now sehun's EX. as in X. so know ur place. please.
Chapter 45: i lovelovelovelovelovelove this storyyy!!! sehun is so osm and everything... *my feelsss* hoping thrs gonna be a sequel or sth :P hehheheheh
Chapter 44: omg hahahahhah this story is awesome!
i finish read this in one day, until 2am lol
sehun is my bias in exo and the way you make sehun character here just make me love him more kdnerlnrkdjfofkr
he make my beat so fast while he confessing to soojin i chapter44 lol
what to do, sehunnieee <3333
its awesome! thankyou for the great story :3
Chapter 45: I just finished this story and it's 11 in the morning... I haven't gone to sleep yet btw. I loved it! I laughed and cried and I really want a gangster Sehun :(
Chapter 45: my god~~~~~~~~ finished in 2 dayss.. #i could have finish it in one day if it were not 4 my bratty brother~ ahah.. super good job author nim.. i can imagine how everything is happening in the story.
how Se Hun fight.. how Jung Ah was fangirling about her friend dating Se HUn.. huaaaa~~
if this thingd happenin real life.. that Soo JIn would be the luckiest person ever... ever ever ever..
hahaha.. how i wish it would be longer.. that i could read it this whole week.. and no need to find a neww ff to read.. u know how hard to find a neww ff after reading an awesome great majestic ff like this.. damn hard u know.. then again... congratulation u have me as a new person to love ur story.. ahha.. n hwaiting and do a better job in the future.. i'll be cheering 4 you.. *throw heartssss* <3 <3 <3
Chapter 45: Part 2.
I'm actually sorry for her, and a few times i was really scared for her too. That must be really traumatizing, but for a person to go through something like that once, you would think would learn not to leave the house alone at night.
And not screaming for help, or trying to get away, her excuse always being that she's to weak compared to a man, true but she could have gone to some self defense classes given her ability to attract problems. Although the not screaming part i may understand it. When someone is really terrified sometimes no sound comes out.
And even though i find Soo Jin incredibly frustrating at times, i'm happy she got her courage in the end, and made things right. I was rooting for her, and i was sad when she was sad, and happy when good things happened to her.
I enjoyed the story. :)
Thanks for sharing it :D
Chapter 45: I read your story in 2 days and it made my heart warm. Sehun is really sweet. I want a protective boyfriend that fights like Bruce Lee too. I really enjoyed the story, even though Soo Jin's stupidity made me want to bang my head against a wall many times. How can someone be so academically smart but stupid at the same time? And that's Sehun's line, no mine. But wow, she sure was surprising. I understand she never felt in love, but still that doesn't justify her lack of logic when she pushed Sehun away. She almost did the same thing to him, that Yoo Ra did. Leave without a good explanation, because that was basically the reason why Sehun didn't want her back. Not because of cheating. She broke up with him and didn't give him any explanation. Which makes me think that Soo Jin is not the only stupid one, with lack of logic, and that probably poor Sehun is a magnet for stupid illogical girlfriends. The patience he had with them both is to be recorded in a world records book.
I really liked Jae Hyun and Jung Ah. I suspected he had a crush on her from the middle of the story, maybe even earlier, and i sort of felt bad for him, because he was the one to push her towards Sehun in the first place. But still, that doesn't necessarily mean Sehun's chance was given by him, because he already had planes on approaching her and taking her to meet his granddad.
It actually surprised me that he wasn't crushing on her since the beginning, and it was actually a nice surprise. Everyone else had a crush on her, it was nice to see him not joining the club. Only later.
I had a soft spot for the exo boys. I liked their friendship a lot. It was one of the nicest things in the story.
Another thing about Soo Jin, is it really possible to be that much a magnet for trouble? I mean if a meteorite would hit earth, chances are it would hit exactly where she would be, with her luck. Were all the erts in Seoul waiting for her behind every corner?
Chapter 45: I was so excited on what was going to happen next that I just finished your fanfic in one day!! Yehet! I love each and every chatacter even though I was creeped out because Soo Jin keeps on attracting erts XD. I love Se Hun character the most, he's so sweet and awesome. Keep up the good work author-nim! :D
When I read the foreword and saw that "My Gangster" was already completed with 45 chapters, I thought for sure that it would be another story that gets dragged out for far longer than it should with ridiculous and unrealistic drama. I could not have been more wrong. I honestly cannot conjure up a single complaint, as I loved everything you did with the characters, settings, and situations. And I don't think Soo Jin took too long, nor did I find her development rushed.
It was, like the rest of the story, quite simply, perfect. <3
P.S.-I've always had a soft spot for just reading about the friendship between the members, and Sehun and his group were lovely and made me so happy.
Chapter 45: *clap clap clap* this was awesome! Ahh I wish this mas my real story with Kai hahaha! Thank you so much for this awesome story! I hope you dont delete it becasue I for sure will be coming again later in the future to read it again!
I swear!... Soojin is so slow!!! She frustrated me, when she kept pushing Sehun away and listening to all the crap that Yoora girl was implanting inside her head!!! Urrrgggh!!!
Nevertheless, I really enjoyed the story, and it's cute how Sehun stalks his girlfriend ^^ hehehehehe...!!!
Great job authornim! Best wishes for your other stories :D :D
Chapter 20: How can people read a fic in one day and even worst in few hours OMG it takes me around 20-30 minutes to read one chapter because I like to imagine what I'm thinking not just read it! I think Im really slow reading too haha!
Chapter 45: hi. its close to 5AM here. Ive just finished reading this whole fic in four hours. I just want to thank you for not disappointing me at all like other fics and want to praise u and bow to you 90 degree angle bc of the massive Sehun feels you have given me. Now if you will excuse me, I will sleep now.
Chapter 45: Just got done reading your story!! It was great!! See sehun as a tough guy was fun to read! But his cutest does come out once in awhile haha but I'm glad they ended up with each other!!
Chapter 45: im new & im glad that i found this story! i finished it in 2 days & its damn great! its too addictive to stop reading, you know? (: keep it up!
Chapter 45: Oh my goddddd!!! just finished this and its exactly 1 in the morning :) this story made me have soooooo many feelz and I havent felt like this while reading in a looooooong time! I already love Sehun but I love him even more now because of this story ^^ fantastic job!
Chapter 45: Thank you! Thank you for making me feel happy. Haha
Haven't read a story about sehun for quite sometimes. This is amazing, your story are very detailed like I'm practically in it. Good job.
Chapter 45: why am i late seeing this fanfic, its so fckin adorable Sehun story, i got the feels even i teared up a bit and gettin annoyed with Soojin`s denial. Good job author-ssi!!
Chapter 45: Love this story!! Sehun is so cute in love~ and soojin... In the last few chapters I am so frustrated with her because of his denial ;-; hehe
Chapter 45: OMG thank you so much for writing this beautiful story! <3 It is honestly one of the best fanfics I ever read! YOU'RE SO AMAZING AND TALENTED. I'm for sure going to check out your other stories! (;
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