Chapter 4: So heartbroken </3 even though I don't ship Kray this was so sad..
Wouldn't he have called an ambulance instead of breaking down though..? ._.

Chapter 4: Omg this was so heart wrenching...beautifully written tho...if only they had waited or even tried to talk :'(

Chapter 3: Thank you so so so much XD

Chapter 3: Yes ~ thank you so much ! You're so considerate for us ouo Thank youuu ! :3

Chapter 3: dfsdccnsjdnfsjkvnwljefb thank you for considering to write an alternate ending. /sobs
you don't how much that angst ending wrecked me.

i'm happy you finally wrote it. i've requested that before and now i'm haaaaaaaaaaapy~
thank you again. <3

This is good! I love it!

Chapter 2: i'm dying. ing. dying. I-I have no words. Finally read this after I remembered about this suddenly. I hated Kris at the beginning (lol I could never hate him but wow he was a ) but after reading his side I wish Lay and Kris communicated better. If they did this all would have been prevented. They missed each other by ing moments and I want to cry at how this could have been prevented.

Chapter 2: Holy asdfghjkl
omg Kris, if only you didn't keep your pride so high, you would have went home fast ;__;
you're such an idiot, Kris.

And asdfghkl you're such a good writer! I love how you wrote out and developed each character ;A;

At first I hated Kris, but now I pity him for being z prideful, foolish idiot. If only they haven't misunderstood each other and were honest to each other D:

Chapter 2: Kris... you're so dumb... Lay... why... if only you waited a little more. And if Kris wasn't stalling then he would've made it in time. Gosh, Kris so dumb...

Chapter 2: /sobs. i can't. i felt so raw right now. /sobs turn to bawls.

can't you at least make an alternate ending? please. i'm begging you. as much as i love this for being so anguish, i want to treat myself some happy ending.

my heart is shattered. thank you for this. <3

Chapter 2: i hoped that the tie broked and lay was still alive... it seems incomplete now

Chapter 2: Make a sequel please ><
Wahhh....

Chapter 2: Why did I read this... why did my stupid finger tap onto this heart breaking story... im shaking and squirming in my seat.. grrrr.. such a good story yet I dont know what to feel anymore ㅠㅠ

Chapter 2: This was so sad and wow...

Chapter 2: O _ O Sad, but Kris you deserved it, Yixing didn't tho

Chapter 2: Kris, do you know a thing? No? Then let me tell you...YOU'RE A ING ! WHY?! WHY DID YOU LEAVE LAYLAY LIKE THAT?! WHY DID YOU LEAVE HIM IN TEARS?! JUST, GAHHH!!!
Dear author, you have one week to update on this story. Because I swear, i'm going to kill that named Kris. Update while Kris is still alive0.o