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huhuhuhuhu cries han river, they were so dumb yet so persistent, huhuhuhUuhuhu glad they solve it and ended up together >_<
Chapter 5: This was so amazing. I wanted to cry because of Sehun's treatment towards Jongin. Thank you so much for this, it's been awhile since I read a really good fanfic and you gave that to us readers. Gosh, this was beautiful.
Chapter 5: im so stupid that i just found out this story ;_; i cried a lot. the way you developed their characters, and how this story is beautifully written, it killed me. thank you so much for writing this. glad there's a happy ending for sekai ;w;
Chapter 3: "I knew how you felt, and even if your feelings weren't returned, I didn't want something like that to happen."
The moment I read this I knew it would become one of the biggest misunderstandings. Sigh. Interpretation is so important.
Chapter 5: Omg this story is the best.
I love the plot you didnt rush it.
And how sehun and jongin aware of important the presence of each other that no one of both will leave each other how hard they tried to do it.
Over all this story be my one favs.
Thankyou for made such lovely and great fic authornim.
Much love for you. :*
Chapter 5: Where do I even start?this was an amazing story with a plot that kept me interested. I have to agree with the person below about the use of kyungsoo. It did remind me of an Asian drama but I still enjoyed reading. The ending was even better the way it ended with sehun finally saying his name.
Many people are sooo happy about this story, I didn't want to stand out like a sore thumb but I want to leave my opinion.
I really loved reading this, the setting is different from other stories and it's easy to read too.
I hope you don't think of this comment as a negative feedback/ hate because it's only a criticism and as I, myself like to write, I like when someone tries to point out what "mistakes" I made or how it could've been better/ if there's room for improvement. Tell me if it bothers you more than help you, I'll delete it.
The only thing stopping me from listing this as one of my favourite story is the "usual drama relationship". What I mean is that I don't know if it was intended but I could guess the ending and it left a bit of a bitter taste in my mouth.
I usually don't like Exo's canon pairings so even if I saw what you were doing with Kaisoo I didn't mind until it reminded me of those Asian drama plots. You know, where the second lead gets used by the first leads (the couple). Usually he/she is kind, even perfect for the one who suffers in the main couple but the latter never forgets the other first lead, no matter how badly he/she's treated. Kyungsoo reminded me of Junmyeon they both seemed more like pawns than JongIn. Well what I want to say is that it appears a bit boring, although you made it clear that Sekai will end up together. So yea, the only criticism is the lack of originality in the relationship's dynamic. I haven't checked out your other stories but I thought it could be helpful.
Chapter 5: this sekai fic was so awesome, combining with tons of heartache but still sweet at some moments. i love the way yourunning the plot
but also still let me know that they loved each other so badly but couldn’t realize their own feeling.
and the moment sehunnie’s dad died made my cry but the part that made me cry the most
was when jongin was thinking of the memories he had with junmyeon. it’s so precious, beautiful and heartache too.
junmyeon was such an angel for him (and for sehun) i loved when a kid like jongin was loved and cared by his adopter.
but again it was hurt me so much when sehun and jongin had their argument and jongin was finally left alone every time, this was hurt me every time sehun treated and said something badly at jongin. i know sehunnie also hurt about that but you didn’t reveal sehunnie’s poit of view tho, but i could stil feel his painful heart too ;A; i believed both of them were hurt, my heart sicked deeply and got heavy every time they fought and hurt each other by word and action. and it was also pained me when jongin try to move on for real every time he was with kyungsoo ;____;
anyway, it ended so good, so good to put away my sadness and filled my with their sweet moments together after those painful years ;_____; i gonna put this sekai fic to be one of my favorite fic too, thanks again
Chapter 5: Happy tears ~ :"))
I love it!!! I want to read more happy Sekai story !! Thx authornim for writing this up! This ff is very decent read . Every word is not poorly used and held its meaning . So, Thank u !
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