Oh My God this is absolutely perfect.Short story but beautiful plot and the details just perfect.Everything from start to finish is perfect.Hope you get to 1000 subscibers soom author-nim.
Best of luck Margaux
Chapter 5: This was really really beautiful omg one moment my heart was breaking and the next it was melting~~ Congrats on being featured!! You truly deserved it:)
I just read it yesterday on a mobile. It was a good story, really. I love the transition of event s and the character development. ~~ Jongin and Sehun came through many misunderstanding but at the end the conveyed their feeling to each other. :) this brings me a lot of sekai feels. ^.^
Chapter 5: I read this all in one go when I should have been doing my coding assignment. Fml. What is life anymore. Then I went on a nostalgic exo youtube spree and now it's nearly 2am. I feel like this fanfic broke me because of how good it was.
Chapter 5: I cried! I cried a lot my roommate asked me if I was ok. This is beautiful! Congrats on it being featured it was well deserved it's just so damn good I think I still want to cry. I'm so upvoting this!
i just logged in to see that this fic was on the front page. i remember reading this on lj when i had gotten into exo early on and it is still my favourite fic. this is so good, the characters, the plot. i love it so much.
3 years in the fandom, best fic I've read in every possible way. I tend to prefer fanfics with a part and even though yours did not, it felt well-balanced and amazing. The plot, the plot twists, the writing, the grammar, the flow of your sentences, the way you described, the characters' dev, omg Kai and Sehun's dev were fantastic, Suho was the best daddy sugar daddy ever, and the list goes on and on. Everything felt realistic, I loved it all and your happy ending is perfect, your epilogue was the best anyone could give this story. I loved the chess game's place held in your story and nearly died at that pawn taking a king checkmate thingy like all the feels All the love gosh. Ah, I really like their childhood memories too. Also, what makes your fanfic so enjoyable is that every 'problem' was resolved in a way, you didn't leave out anything and Sehun's speech at the end is so hurting me in a good way.
I would have liked to learn what happened to the Carnival even just a bit but it's okay. But why is Sehun lying he likes bitter when he's drinking sweet?
So yeah thank you a lot to you for writing it and to everyone that upvoted this because I wouldn't have been able to read it all at once and right away otherwise. I'm off stalking your stories lol
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