Chapter 16: Maybe a version of The Devil being in the other world, like how would he and Jina and the whole react and how would he act over there you know, PLEASE WRITE IT IF YOU CAN!!!!!
Chapter 11: I'd really like to read a version where Sunmi was the one who got transported. If you can, maybe write a one shot of it??? PLEASE!!!!! I'D LOVE TO READ IT!!!!
Chapter 2: the concept is hecka interesting and nice. but honestly, i dont really read these kinds but i'll give it a try. omg i feel like im getting into something i shouldnt i have school tomorrow rip
Chapter 64: duuuuuude this was so so so good! Long, but good. However I keep NOT imagining Sehun, while reading this, only when he's the Devil Sehun do i imagine that he's sehun woops bad boy sehun for me i guess ha but great nevertheless!! I still love the plot!! I wanted to know how Devil Sehun was in the other world, thatd be funny hahaah
Chapter 16: I think you got the game name wrongly. If the ball is flying over the net always it would have been volleyball instead of netball. In volleyball the ball comes into contact with the wrists but not netball. Hope I did clarify some things.
Chapter 64: LITERALLY I READ THIS IN ONE GO and although it took like, the whole day, it was worth it! It was the weekend so woohoo. I'm kind of curious, how many pages is this story? I don't think you can check if you only wrote it in asianfanfics but, yeah. Anyway, this was amazing and like, I have humongous mirror in my room and uMm liKE PLS DON'T BE A CREEPY MIRROR
Chapter 64: I didn't thought that Sehun would be THAT bad. I actually hoped that the Devil will somehow fall with the Jina in the other world and then voila. Ahahha.
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