Chapter 65: MY FAVORITE QOUTE/PART IS THE PART WHERE THE THE DIRT PERSON RUINS ONEWS COUPON AND LIKE HE FORCES HIM TO EAT IT AND HE GOES CRAZY I DIED LAUGHING
Chapter 65: THERE ARE A LOT OF GOOD QUOTES IN YOUR STORY, i COULDN'T DECIDE ON JUST ONE...
1- "i DON'T KNOW WHAT LOVE IS...BUT IF THE HEART IS SUPPOSED TO HURT WHEN YOU LOSE LOVE, THEN i THINK i MIGHT HAVE LOVED YOU." tEARS AND BLOOD - TAEMIN
2-"eat it you evildoer! eat it all!" "yeah! that's right! thief! you better enjoy that coupon! because i won't get to!" OHH...ONEW'S PISSED
KEEP UP THE AMAZING WRITING :)
Chapter 55: "I c-can't be anything but sorry!I'M SORRY!" His eyes teared up and he didn't even care. "I can't change that I'm a demon! But I WANT TO! For the life I've made as the human Lee Jinki! And for YOU! And I HAVE changed! You've changed me!" Tears slipped the rim of his eyes and he flickered them away in embarrassement. "S-so please. Just please. Don't hate me.no matter what you choose to do, just don't hate me. I'm sorry." (Lee Jinki, chapter 55 "The Leader")
I was so speechless when i read this..it's just so emotional and his words gave me so many feels TwT
He must love the girl so much he's willing to sacrifice his pride muttering endless string of apology and begged her not to hate him for who he is..it really breaks my heart .
Chapter 65: SORRY I MAXED OUT ON CHARACTERS IN THE LAST COMMENT LOL:
2. "I've never felt more in control and warm than I do now. And not even the uncomfortable spring weather kind of warm. My soul feels warm." (Choi Minho to female lead, Chapter 51). I feel like this quote meant a lot because it's really the first time we see any development between Minho and the female lead. He finally expresses his true feelings. He's not JUST obsessing over her or just desiring her. She. . . makes him feel like he's more than just a demon. As I mentioned before, I don't know why, but I feel like the relationship between Minho and the female lead is purposely being put in the backdrop. It doesn't leave our minds, but it's not exactly the center of attention either. I don't know, I feel like there's going to be some kind of important development between these two~
Okay, I need to stop rambling now. Great chapter!! And I'm glad you updated!!!
I'm also glad our lovely human is slowly but surely beginning to warm up to the SHINee boys again :)
Chapter 65: Author-nim, you really can't expect me to pick ONE quote from this entire story, right?! xD This whole story is so beautifully, well-written. You mentioned that LB's Minho doesn't have fans. But I confess, I like him a lot. His character is interesting. Yeah, he can be rowdy and childish just like a regular guy, but (don't ask my why I feel this way) it feels like the care Minho feels for the human girl is just a little bit more than that of the other SHINee members. He isn't as expressive, but you can see it in the way you portray him when he's around her. The things he says to her, the way they worked together to stop the dirt man, the fact that he was brave enough to physically touch her first after the other SHINee members chose not to push things (chapter 51). . . I feel like there's a different. . . possibly stronger connection between the two that you have yet to expound upon. (I could be absolutely, completely, and totally wrong and if I am, then I am SO sorry xD)
Um. . . OKAY, I'LL PICK TWO
1. "Okay so. . . I met her a while back during an MV shooting and was about to kill her because she smelled really good, but then she was really nice. And smart. And pretty. And loves animals. And then we became friends, but I got kind of obsessed. And she got hurt. And I got obsessive. And all the other members like her too. And she doesn't know it, but a lot of guys actually look at her, and we get jealous. And so we kind of. . . kidnapped her. And she's scared of us now and hates our guts. But we're teaching her about the supernatural world right now so that she isn't super vulnerable anymore. And Luna's supposed to protect her, but obviously she's slacking off right now. And please don't tell Umma." (Lee Taemin to Kim Jongin, Chapter 59). [This explanation was so goddamn funny omfg. You basically summed up the entire story into one paragraph and I couldn't control myself xD I love this part LOL]
I've been feeling not too great recently and working, but I'm working on that chapter I promised you guys. It'll be short, but at least done right? Probably be posted tomorrow.
Chapter 45: My favourite character ia onew, first because he's my bias so i'm naturally focused on him aincebi started to read this story ><
But then as i continued to read i started to like him not only because he's my bias but because of his characterisation. My favourite part would be when he sang jojo..idk why but that chapter just reaally grabbed me ><
Chapter 64: I like your female protagonist. She acts realistically and doesn't, like, fall madly ing in love with these boys. I would have given up on this story if she willingly stayed with them demons and created a reverse harem :/
Chapter 64: My favorite character would be.... Well... *small voice* all of them?... I guess each and everyone of them have this unique characteristic that goes very well with the story.. Including luna and the Christmas tree :p
Chapter 64: I like taemin and how he seems to grow through out the story and the emotions he gives out seem to be the most pure. Although a lot of people seem to like him my least favorite is jinki I'm not sure why I just don't really like the way he interacts with her. I do see the story kind of leaning in onew's direction though and that's fine with me.
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