Chapter 20: It's my second time reading this fic & I find myself crying like an ugly seal again. Sighh, this fic is absolutely beautiful; the way you play with words and the way you had everything planned out. Thank you for writing such a touching story.
P.s. I've read the latest chapter of morning glory & i'm waiting for yr next update, author nim. Take yr time :) fighting!!
Chapter 31: Love it! The whole story entwines with, and revolves around its title "Baby's Breath"! Meaningful. The poem is so beautiful and it's such a clever decision to choose it for your story. Found myself crying like a fool thanks to all the heart-rending momentary goodbyes, and smiling like a fool 'cos of all the sweet, touching moments :') this story is very carefully crafted and woven with excellent choice of vocabulary even though I thought you could afford to be more daring and use stronger words to reflect the characters' feelings. The suspense before the major scenes, as well as the pace of the story are awesome. The ending is stupendous; it reflects how simple words (referring to Baekhyun's wish) have the power to convey noble ideas and emotions. The ending part is my favourite and I totally appreciate how you leave it to the readers' imagination to think about Baekhyun and Chanyeol's future days together, or what they would end up as. I like how you bequeathed personalities to the main characters and they are rather relatable but some parts felt a bit skimpy i.e. written for the sake of accounting to the readers... I honestly think that it's a small pity that Baekhyun and Chanyeol's inner struggles were not given enough attention. Ok, to be fair, I have to admit that I just couldn't stop reading this fic and was hoping you'd written more (I only paused once throughout) :P
Your talents are so admirable, author-nim. Please write more quality stories like this! ^^
Chapter 20: Omg I m literally shedding river of tears right now... I seriously regret not reading this long ago... Such a beautiful story and I m only in ch20... I just hope this fic ends sweetly, cuz I'll be dehydrated by all the tears
Thankyou Author-nim
Chapter 31: i had read this story way before i entered the fandom, since i didn't know who chanyeol and baekhyun were and your story was just, yea i can't find the proper words to describe my feeling at that time. your story is definitely one of my foremost reason to love baekhyun and exo this much atm. Thanks for making such an amazing and heart warming story. hope you will keep on with your writing bc jesus christ it's so good. love this story and love you
Chapter 31: This was surprising so good and the character development was amazing. I didn't let myself cry but my eyes did brim with tears a few times. Such a good story, I feel like the storyline stood on it's own unlike most fanfics that rely on the pre-set characters. Now to read what's out so far of the sequel!
Chapter 29: I was always afraid to read this fanfic, because it seemed really sad (it is...). Its been bookmarked for a while, and I'm so glad I got around to reading it! This story is really beautiful, the ending was kinda too open for me, but I still loved it nonetheless. Awesome story, author-nim!
Hi I'm CBs in Vietnam.I really love your fic ^^. Can you give me permission to translate your fic into Vietnamese.Please!!!
Of course, i will take out with full your credit. Thank you so muck for writtng ít <3
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