Baby's Breath Completed!

by jindeul
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Baekhyun and Chanyeol, with Exo as cameos.


*Baby's Breath

"Baby's Breath" is a traditional, filler flower used most often for corsages, bouquets, and other floral arrangements. It symbolizes purity of the heart, sincerity, and happiness, which is the main reason why florists commonly present it with roses, a powerful symbol of true and everlasting love.

My name is Byun Baekhyun.

My stepbrother's name is Park Chanyeol.

I'm the captain of my school's varsity soccer team and I have good grades, more or less.

My stepbrother has a "below average" IQ of 65. He's been home-schooled for the majority of his life. Yes, he's mentally retarded. Intellectually disabled. Cognitively handicapped. Whatever you call it. He doesn't do much with his life but water the plants at our family's florist shop and try to solve second grade math problems. He still counts on his fingers.

Life's been different, to say the least, ever since he moved in with us.

My name is Byun Baekhyun and I want my stupid stepbrother to disappear.



*Author's Notes;

(2/6/13): My advertisement bid won! Thank you to everyone who contributed to all the karma I saved up to advertise this fanfiction, couldn't have done it without all of you. That being said, I would really appreciate it if the comments were relevant to the actual story. Many readers leave me great feedback, and I don't want to lose sight of them in the flood of incoming 'Congratulations on winning the bid!' messages. This comment box is for constructive comments only, and feedback is what I saved up my karma points for. If you'd really like to congratulate me, maybe take the time to read the advertised story and comment? It would mean much more. Thanks again!

*Translations & Reviews;

If you would like to translate Baby's Breath into the language you speak, please ask for permission first! You must credit me properly for writing the original story and provide a link on your translated story that goes back to this page. I will not allow duplicate translations of any language, so if it has been translated in one language already, please do not ask to write another! Thank you!

Vietnamese Translations (Thanks to you_and_me!)

Intro l 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 l 6 l 7 l 8 l 9 l 10

French Translations (Thanks to Belgian-ELF!)


Indonesian Translations (Thanks to amusuk!)


*Official Trailer;

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avelric () says:
This is awesome, I love this fanfic!!! I really like how you make the plot a bit unpredictable, so that the readers would get surprised around the ending~~ Keep up the good work!! ehehe ^^

EmptySighs () says about chapter 29:
This is wonderful~♡

aigooshinee () says about chapter 29:
Just finished reading. I cried like a baby omg. I couldn't put my phone down until I finished. Totally worth staying up all night though.

Blossomdutch () says about chapter 30:
It's a great masterpiece ;; Me and my friends didn't get to sleep the whole night because we read this together. We ended up in tears goddammit ;; ;; It's just a great story. I love you authornim ;;

Kpopismylyfe () says about chapter 29:
Awe, this was such a heart-wrenching yet warming story :') Glad to see stories like this amongst alot of the unproperly written stories on AFF. It's weird how I didn't see this any sooner! Anyway, I finished this story in less than 4 hours, and it definitely was NOT a waste of time. Man, for a person who rarely cries because of stories, this fanfic honestly made me tear up a bit.

jojossi () says about chapter 29:
didn't sleep all night last night because i felt an urge to finish all the chapters as soon as possible
and i finished this in 5 hours. like my friend said this is very good, beautiful, wonderful ah whatever they called it <3

it has rich plot, (forgot in which chapter) when they brought chanyeol to the institution, when baekhyun saw chanyeol away, my heart ache. it felt so real.
one of best baekyeol fanficts so far

i really want to give a comment to every chapter but it's to late.....unfortunately i didn't follow this from the very start, i can't feel the feeling following this from the beginning, waiting for the next chapter </3

in some parts i thought chanyeol was actually back to normal, like he wasn't disable at all but you didn't give any clue until the end. but i do love the ending seriously /cry a river

dateexo () says:
heart heart!!

dateexo () says:
I started to read this story and its wonderful!!

yoon_bbab () says:
I'm contemplating whether I should read this again ^^

yoon_bbab () says:
This story is great :)

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