Chapter 31: I don't know what to think.
Tao... He betrayed me, that piece of .
And Kris ks Yifan or I don't know, my little baby, poor him.
And Zelo... That little poor .
....
And Chen...That camel is going to die, too.
I am so betrayed right now
Chapter 31: Ah honestly for the first time ever, i never felt this dumb. My mind went numb and after each chapter I'll think about the riddle, the author notes, the connection, the underlying meaning, everything you got in there- sadly, i got them all wrong! Every single things revealed make me shocked as hell! You did a great job, really Authornim. If you were to stand on a stage, i'll be there- giving you a standing ovation!
Chapter 31: I only can said that this is really complicated... But it's make me fascinated about whole story... This two days make my mind blank just read this fics and thanks for this wonderful fics~ l love this fics authornim... ^_^
Almost two years after reading this the first time and I came back to read it again..I'm still so mindblown and I can't find the words to express how amazing this story is to me. This mixture of genres and themes are exactly my cup of tea and I love how the characters are revealed to be completely different from what readers thought they were. And to think I still trusted them even when I read it again
Chapter 30: This story was complicated yet attractive. I love it how you made us wondering what kind of character they are. I never read this kind of fanfic before so I really love this mystery based fanfic so far. Goodjob authornim. I am surely will read more your stories. Fighting!!
Chapter 30: I read it in about two days, great story! It was really hard for me to decipher your hints. Is this related to any other story? I'm asking because I read Red Velvet: Cursed before reading this one, and I know that that one is kind of related to Noblesse Oblige (I read it too)
Anyways, it was such a great story so thank you for writting this! ♥
Chapter 30: Wow~ I enjoyed this story soooo much!! It always had me on the edge of my seat! Thanks for a story like this author!! ^^ Hope you make more stories like this and they turn popular now and in the future xb
Chapter 30: I am a new reader here. Started reading this story maybe two or three days ago. I have to admit the story is fascinating. While many things were predictable to me, like tao and kris' identities and more, some of the parts were truly shocking. I truly wanted to believe in yongguk till the end. Hyoyeon always seemed suspicious to me and poor yifan he was too caught up in his own to notice the missing finger. And the fact that kevin died, the best agent they had after he had sat in the busby's chair also had me thinking hyoyeon was a part of this. From the first moment that tao appeared in the story I wanted him to turn out to be some psycho that decieved yifan and slowly the small hints led me to believe in it. And I would like to believe that yongguk set him free ( you might have noticed I have a sweet spot for schizophrenia) I myself am very interested in psychology and the way you pinned mental illnesses to the characters was quite well done. In most if the stories that involve mental disabilities one can sense a certain level of ignorance towards the subject. Even though the illnesses of the characters were not explained in detail I feel like you know what you are dealing with. There were rare holes, but that is okay. All in all the sotry is great. My favorite part was when yifan was shouting the words from the first chapter before ending his life. It left a very powerful feeling behind. The saddest part tho is that this dollhouse/asylum continues to function and dictator kamenashi has not been brought to justice. I am niw planning to proceed with your anither story "red velvet: cursed" if I remember the title correctly. I hope you continue to get these awesome story udeas and turn them into very good stories. I have not read a mystery fanfiction this good in a while and I would likr to continue reading your works in the future. good luck. I praise your patience and persistance if you have read this far :D
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