Chapter 30: To be honest, i'm not exactly fond of this kind of stories because i'm so bad at understanding riddles, so I just read through all of this quickly.
About the beginnings of each chapter, the monologue thingy, I kind of figured it out it was 'Yifan'. But at first I only thought Yifan and Kris were two personalities in one body, because the monologues seem to 'know' what's happening. The other things... I didn't figure it out LOL. But the story was really interesting so ofcouse i can't stop reading
What I'm feeling now? I feel.. good? Satisfied? Because you were kind enough to post an explanation chapter and let me understand what have been happening. I really didn't expect the Busby chair to be poisonous. I think the loop is really terrifying. This story is very well written. Thank you for the entertainment~ i need to check out kris/yifan's background fic now that i've finished this one.
Chapter 30: I'm still confused!! T.T So like, is this story a never ending loop, with the same characters every time? Or is it a loop of same events that happen but with different people, because Chen in the chair, and the new victim...
Chapter 30: I don't know how to describe this...I read some of your stories and I definitely liked them..but this one is my favourite ..I like mind blowing stories which make you think..and worry ..and be afraid ..and get shocked..I went through all of this..and now I feel sad cause I am gonna miss this..but I feel kind of satisfied that I understood everything eventually ..I really thank you for sharing this story and writing it in the first place.. You are an awesome writer ..And I'm glad I found your stories <3
Chapter 29:My mind has been blown and destroyed while reading this and...I don't think I've ever read a story that has made me think this much before. I love how perfectly written this was and how you thought of this is simply brilliant!
Chapter 30: GOD I hate this! Not because this is a bad story (instead this is genius, perfect and clearly written by a professional author), but because this had made me frustrated! I just really want to burn that damn house down! I am angry now!
Chapter 1: I'm not gonna say much because I don't want to spoil anything for anyone. I just wanted to say that this is the second time I'm reading this because it is the best fanfiction story I have ever read. If you're questioning whether or not you should read this, just do it. It is well worth your time.
Chapter 30: This was amazing, an absolutely thrilling read that kept me at the edge of my seat the whole time I was reading it. When all the clues started to make sense & everything started to come together, my jaw just dropped. This is absolutely amazing & I would recommend this to anyone but probably not for the weak hearted
Chapter 30: This story is absolutely beautiful. You, my friend, are my inspiration to writing stories. I wish I can write as well as you.
Actually, reading this has reminded me of three video games; Corpse Party, IB, and Mad Father..maybe because of its' horror theme and riddles.
I also feel bad about writing my current story since the Wu family characters are similar to my characters :/ it would be as if I'm plagiarizing since mine is still in progress and this is already published.
Anyway, 100/10 would recommend! ^_^
Chapter 30: This is just genius! Yifan had been targeted since the beginning. I never thought that. Ohmygod. And Tao. He's sickeningly mad. Asked Hyoyeon to find Yifan for entertainment. This's sick.
Chapter 30: Holy Crap!! This story was amazing!! A friend told me to read this and I finally got around to it and it was just a total mind ... you did such an amazing job writing this!!
Chapter 30: OH MY GOD............I really wanted Tao and Kris to be together......no matter what kept happening between them I just somehow wanted them to be together......
This story almost turned me insane.......
I'm so glad I read this after this was completed.......I have no idea how I would've survived if I could only read one or two chapters a week and had to keep waiting...........
In chapter 16(Elixer) whoever is speaking in the beginning said 'You heartless monster. I hope you slip and fall.' and I laughed for a good five minutes......
I also laugh every time you mention Mr.Gasmask........
I have one question, though.....
What is Donghae's story?
Chapter 29: OMG ... I was waiting for something regarding hyoyeon, I dunno but with all this n everyone being a suspect I thought she would too why .. because if kris was yifan than of course she would know. Isn't it? .
wow a really great story ..
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