that was hilarious that Kyu did 100 sit-ups continuously (starting from 94). i literally LOL-ed at that. Kyu is so funny in here! <br />
i absolutely loved the update! <br />
Hopefully Fishy comes to save Hae Rin cause i'm going to be really sad if anything does happen. though if she dies, then the story will end and i don't want that either! <br />
Update soon? :)
awwwwwwww, damn...I so hoped for a little drama scene in this one, with DOnghae seeing "Hae Rin" in the gym and asking her how she got here and her replying she met Kyu this morning...and then they finally would have some idea on what was going on...but lol...guess not. :D<br />
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But I loooooved looooooooooooooved Kyu being all jealous in the gym, trying to impress "Hae Rin". So funny and adoreable.<br />
By the way... I love Kyu's POV because he is soooooooooo narcisstic...love it...I can't stop laughing whenever it's his POV.<br />
And just to cute of Ha Young to be worried about Kyu.<br />
They both are just too stupid to realize that they are having feelings for each other.<br />
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Oh. and now Hae Rin and the killer meat...soooo exciting.<br />
Can't wait to read more.<br />
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Keep writing...don't make us wait that long again. :D
I'm still reading ! I'm soooooooooooooo glad you updated<br />
This story is like a really good story it should be featured ;]<br />
I love how Kyuhyun acts here !!Oh Noes! (yes noes) I wonder whats <br />
going to happen to Hae Rin! Fishy becomes a hero? xD Update soon!<br />
or at leat update and finish the story!
i just started reading your fanfic today and i've already fallen in love with it! especially Kyu (how can anyone be as adorable as he is?)! <br />
i hope you update soon cause i really love it a lot! <br />
and i wish you luck on your exams!
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW...this is soooo great...seeing Kyu reasoning with himself because of Ha Young...he really doesn't want to leave her alone...really caring.<br />
Loved the scene outside...the hair pulling thing...so much fun. :D<br />
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And Hae Rin hugging Donghae was a really cute scene, too...thanks.<br />
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Okay...btw...Teukie waking up the other...pffffffffffft hahaha...soooo funny. :D<br />
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And now I really can't wait for the next chapter...exciting to see what will happen when Ha Young, Donghae, Kyu and Eunhyuk show up at the fitness center...will Donghae finally notice something or will he be tricked again?<br />
Hm...even if Donghae is tricked...I'm sure evil smart Kyu won't be tricked that easily.:D<br />
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KEEP WRITING <br />
Kyyra
OMO!!!I was like, imagining Kyu and Ha young pulling each other's hair hahaha. and also, I'm so touched when Hae rin hugged Donghae!<br />
I can't wait what would be the reaction of Donghae when Ha young and Kyu enter the gym hahahhaa. Kyu is sooo caring to Ha young! *aishhh.. I'm falling even more with him hahahha.<br />
LOOOOVVVEEE this chappie!!! can't wait for the next chap though.<br />
HWAITING!!!!
-hyun-ae- here.<br />
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@JaejoongLove : I'm glad you like the story! Sorry for the many chappies, I've been writing this for how long already. I just posted it now on asianfanfics since Winglin is down. Nway, keep reading and enjoying!!! I hoper you'll keep loving the story!!!<br />
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@Starberry :YEAY! You made it to the latest chap!!!That's super fast!! Well, I'm gonna be updating soon, so keep enjoying the story kay!!
Hi there :) This JaeJoongLove ^^<br />
Wow, this story is really cute ^^ I didn't realize there were so many chappies lol<br />
I really like the first chappie!! I love the text message he sent to her LOL so funny! :)<br />
Love it so far ^^ Im gonna go and read the rest :D<br />
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I caught up now! I've reached your comment, x] <br />
Kyuhyun is acting sweet? <br />
I'm sure some more drama is coming up now<br />
Since Donghae and Eunhyuk had seen Hae Rin already
I'm only on chapter seven right now but I love your story. I'm not sure why you don't have any comments, your story is so well written and has a good story line and only two subscribers!
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