Chapter 4: Your story is amazing and very beautiful.
The BaekYeol story is perfect. BaekHyun is a character full of fault bud I love him. He touched me. ChanYeol is perfect like BeakHyun told us.
The HunHan couple is what everyone which for in a relationship. But Luhan's character got on my nerves. The way he acts with BaekHyun (not that I support the stuborness of this one).
I just can't understand the Taorixing relationship. I'm like Baekhyun, I can understand why they did that but not how they did that. I find their relationship simply not healthy. I would have prefer if Tao and Yixing were also in love. I believe that you can love two persons but not that you have to keep both next to you even if you have to hurt them. Because for me, Tao and Yixing won't be truly happy in this situation. They will always be aware of their lover with their best friend in the next room. Kris is the lucky one. I can understand his situation. And Tao is the one I'm the most touched about. But I think He made the wrong decision. Yixing is the mistress. I would have never allowed the mistress to come in my house. I hope in the future of this story Yixing and Tao will fall in love with eachother. If not, I'm sure this relationship won't last long.
But apart from the difference of believes about the relationship, I saw me in this story. I saw my insecurities, I saw my hopes. And it touched me ! Thank you !
Chapter 4: This fanfic was amazing! I loved it so much, your writing is amazing c: it taught me a valuable lesson in each chapter. Thanks for writing this! :D
It was really one of the best fics i ever read (and I read a lot) it was just a pleasure to read it, I really enjoyed every word u wrote, there was a meaning in each one. Thank u so much. U have great talent ;)
This is perfect T^T I was already in a fangirl mode when I read the final sentence T^T There is still 2 chapters I'll read -yay!- and I'm sure I'll love them too. This story is just so cute i can't stop smiling T^T
Chapter 2: Holy . I was done with the first chapter and I honestly thought I had read at least ten. I was surprised when I saw I was barley on two haha I love long chapters.
Chapter 1: wow! ypu depicted their character persobalities so well.. this is the first fanfic that depicted it so well... love it but i feel so bad for baekyeol
Chapter 4: Very good story! I like that Baekhyun wasn't perfect and that he didn't realize this. It's hard to see our flaws because in our minds they are not flaws at all. I like that he finally got his man even though he still has a long way to go to becoming a better man or even a grown up. I cried and I don't usually do that.
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