Chapter 9: Omg.. This fic so beautiful. Ohh noo.. I really love luhan and I know how it feels to manipulated your character. So great.. I ship them, great..
Chapter 9: Okay TBH I've seen your fic recommended many times but I never read for the past few years cuz I can't deal with angst and I wasn't a XiuHan shipper in the beginning of Exo's debut. I saw this again recently and I was like hey I should check it out now and omg I am overwhelmed. The relationship between XiuHan seems so real, the small plots that went on - ChanBaek, Jongdae being the supportive yet eccentric Friend, Yixing being an angel, Jongin being an but turning out to be good, Sehun being the quiet supporter... The list goes on. It's so ing real. I cannot. This is so so so beautiful and it got me so emotional (at the Ni de wo de part I almost screamed and cried I swear omg) and this is so beautiful and real and I cannot and you are perfect I'm going to stalk your other fics now goodbye have a perfect life
Chapter 9: This is so great. maaaan, i'm sad that i've already finished this masterpiece and salty af for those people who hadn't read it yet bc daaaang this is beautifulto the point that i want to un-read it just so i can re-read it again. Thanks for giving a happy ending tho, i thought i had dug my own grave again into reading a major character death lmao
Chapter 9: This was such a great story! I put off homework so that I could finish it and I don't even regret it. The plot and the characterization were really well planned out and flowed smoothly, particularly Xiu's slow fall for Luhan, which is not an easy thing to write but you did it so well. Even the minor characters had well-written parts and made the story better. The emotions that both Luhan and Xiumin went through were authentic and I totally wanted to cry a few times, especially when I thought Luhan was going to die and I was totally freaking out. The story was written really well and you had some great imagery in there that really made your style stand out. Really the only thing negative I can say is that waking up from a coma and forgetting a loved one is kind of a trope, but you managed it so well that it doesn't even matter. Congrats on writing such an enthralling story!
Chapter 9: Omo, I can't even believe how good this is! It really touched my heart! The way you write is so amazing, you really know how to use the perfect words! This is one of my favorite fanfics ever!
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