Chapter 9: <span class='smalltext text--lighter'>Comment on <a href='/story/view/252003/9'>Part VII: Rebirth/Epilogu...</a></span>
thank you thank you thank you so much for writing such a good story. where do i even begin? firstly, i love the way you used the astronomy metaphors, incorporating it into your book titles, chapter titles, and constantly using it to describe minseok's life. It was very satisfying to see the metaphor used consistently instead of being randomly brought in at the with no strings attached. It makes the book stand out in many ways. I also absolutely adored the role of the side characters and how you stuck to the same ones instead of introducing a new character every single time. jongin in particular was great. (also, was that a hint that jongin loved luhan the whole time or am i just extremely dumb?) anyways, the last chapter was the best one imo. I was just a big emotional mess throughout the whole chapter and when luhan came back for minseok i started bawling my eyes out ;~; every line was simply so poetic and heartbreaking and real, and i love the conclusion that minseok was a constant in luhan's life even when he forgot about him. if you see this, just know that i loved your work. definitely one of the best fandom classics out there. (also can i just say ive been praying that minah would convert to chanbaek since she was introduced so ty)
Chapter 1: not gonna lie the introduction and chapter titles are scaring me a little bit rn but im going to read this fic nonetheless because xiuhan is life and this fic is somewhat of a legend among exols. i hope it lives up to its rep!
Hi. My name is Zoraida, but my nickname is Ziara, I wanted to ask you for permission to use your work in an audiobook type project that I want to start, please accept me.
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