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xbunnyinlovex
#1
Yes!! Finally! Kris killed that BASTARD LIANG!! I hope Kris and Jungah are in happy land now~~ T^T
pureduck #2
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--nerdyexotic #3
I don't like this ending... T^T.
muzikseoul
#4
The gif doesn't make me feel any better but this story is a great story.

However, I really want a happy ending T.T
But I guess it is better if he can reunite with Jungah.
You are a greatest author. You shared us so many beautiful stories and we all really enjoyed reading. After reading chapter 1 of your story, there is something that tells us to read more.

You deserve the number 1 spot at Asianfanfics :D
Fighting!
I am going to support your next fanfic :D Daehyun<3
theNinjaFailX3
#5
You showed that love was bittersweet very well! Like, alot of both. Yeah, it was a sad ending, but what if Kris lived? He'll still be all sad and stuff without Jungah....

But that gif I've seen countless times made me feel ALOT better.
lululemon_lover24 #6
I hope Kris and Jungah found each other in heaven.
I read this last chapter right before two of my friends (both guys) came over to hang out...BAD IDEA. I was in tears, and when they asked what was wrong I explained that the 'story' I was reading had the saddest ending ever, and they proceeded to made fun of me for it, but I told them they wouldn't understand unless they read it! I don't think I've ever felt this much grief over a story, but I still feel the need to thank you for writing it.
But please, no more tragic endings? Especially if it's an EXO FF...I don't know how much more my heart can take
angellight28 #7
AUTHOR-NIM! I WANT ANOTHER VERSION OF THIS...WITH A HAPPY ENDING THIS TIME!
ANYWAY- I LOVED IT!
Manda5mile #8
no...Y everyone must die.....hope you comeback making a happy endeing story, like you used to
ilikekpopboys #9
The gif didn't make me feel better :'( Plus someone my age has recently passed away also :'( At least Kris and jungah can be together in heaven :)
imtarynh
#10
This is such a sob worthy story, you're amazing I swear!
anyuangoci #11
OHHH MYYYY GOOOD,, can"t believe They Alø died DDDD::: Soo SAAAD!, but still i enjoyed reading this story. I hope the NeXT story will have a happy ending
Aolani
#12
THE GIF DIDNT MAKE ME FEEL BETTER
UNNIE DX
InfiniteLove52
#13
.....so does Kris meet Jungah. I'll admit I was hoping that there could be a second when Zico died. IF YOU EXCUSE MEI HAVE SOME KRIS READING TO DO.
iloveu290
#14
......it ok..... THE GIF DID MAKE ME FEEL BETTER
iwant2bangyongguk #15
wahhhh i knew something like this would happen! TT_TT
the title and angst says it all.
but i enjoyed reading it!

i hope you make another amazing story... with a happy ending this time ;)
daisysuperstar4 #16
why? TT_TT
parktaemi
#17
Oh man, this was a really hectic fanfiction. BUT I LOVED IT NONETHELESS.

THIS IS AN AWESOME FIC.
stephhh-
#18
this end is so depressing but
aaaargh|
this fic is so good omg~
it totally isnpired me to make an angsty fic >.<
i love you author-nim!
EviLivE
#19
T_T kris.. I can't imagine how handsome he is when he was in pain *eh?* hahaha great story.. at least Liang die HA!
kpop_lala123
#20
SUCH A GOOD STORY. I cried so much at the ending! I love your stories!! So sad that all three main characters died ;..(
WildBunny #21
Ahh it had to have a sad ending! Kris...Jungah...Zico... R.I.P! Ahaha anyway I loved the story and hope you to see you at your next story
hototheingya
#22
OMG ARE YOU KIDDING ME SJSHSISHSHHSUSHSHSUSISVSHSHSUSHS /SOBS/ oh well they're reunited in heaven.



Gosh your stories are daebak!!!
pureinfinite
#23
lol no sequel. xD
amazing story author! your stories are always outstanding! i cannot wait for your next one. r.i.p to three main characters... T_____T
LifelessPassion
#24
This ending made me cry my eyes out.... God i love your fanfics!!!
flyylikejunhyungx
#25
omg. OMFG. THAT WAS SUCH AN AMAZING STORY ;_____; and even though im sad all three died in the end, it was nice to have a different ending rather than the happily-ever-after kind. This was such a good story, great job<3
kpopcrazy00
#26
This is just...SO FREAKING SAD!!! What an ending TT^TT
SmirKariseuma
#27
this is amazing ; __ ; tragic and beautiful at the same time.
actually, i want kris to die for no reason -.-
and the gif at the ending... *shoots myself*
HanaSakura
#28
I never expected that this will happen!!!! TT^TT
All the main character died and you make me cry so many time author-nim!!!!!!!!!

DAEBAK STORY!
jungiieexoxo
#29
THIS WAS SO AMAZING!!! I followed the updates religiously and they never let me down. Thank you sooo much for an amazing piece!!
TyniNightmare #30
dayum D; all three mains died T___T"
it was one intense fic o.O
hwaiting see you in your new fics><
korean_fan101
#31
That did make me feel better...lol aww this was a sad ending... ;( But either way u did an incredible job once again. Thank you so much for writing this story :) My tears were worth shedding ^^
shawtyshawty
#32
What happened to Luhan, Lay, Xiumin, Tao, and Chen? How did they deal with it? Are they okay? You didn't tell us about them!!!
AlwaysMe-
#33
All three main characters died...TT^TT
I am forever sobbing now...

But... THIS WAS SUCH AN AWESOME STORY!
shawtyshawty
#34
Major goosebumps.
Major shivers down the back.
Major ugly tears streaming down cheeks.

I swear to god, you're one of the rare fanfic authors that made me cry so many times. Your writing is like magic!
Yoko_Yamaa
#35
I never expected al three of to die...
geeks-
#36
Omg, you finished the story author-nim! ^-^ I loved it. It's so sad. ;-; I had a feeling.
Awww kris. </3
I LOVED IT!
loveofmusic #37
I waited religiously for updates for this story, and I am happy to say it is one of my top favorites and I can't wait to come back one day and reread this wonderful story.
LeapFrog #38
Ahhh . I forgot about Jungah !.
When I read that chapter , I was kind of pissed . I literally was yelling "DON'T YOU DIE ON KRISSSSSS !." And when she did , I felt more emotions than I've ever thought . ;_____;
Keiko89
#39
omfg that fic was so good. i cried so much XD
LeapFrog #40
Oh Holy Shat .
It's a sad ending for all . But I think it was for the better . I wouldn't have wanted Kris to be lonely and depressed the rest of his life . Not that I'm saying him dying was a better thought . But you know what I mean .
When Zico died , oh man . Feelings . I actually cried . Like , full stream of tears . LOL .
You , dbskgirl , are one of my absolute favourite authors . :)
This might be a ff I'll read again in the future ~~
ShawolExoticSoneElf #41
I knew Kris was gonna die in the end.. :/ But at least that Liang died. He deserved it. -__- Even though there's a sad ending, the story was still really great! :D Another story well done! :D

The Kris gif was so cute. :3
stick_oLoveEXO
#42
this story is daebak. I'm giving the best bows and thumbs up of mine authornim I've predicted from the chapter before the final that Kris will die..but i didn't expect when i read the first chapters that this will be the end. syrsly my vocabulary..ain't not enough to explain how awesome it is
munchabun_ #43
Such a good story. aldjflajdfa;; I love all your stories. <3333
aozora
#44
omg i love you! tragic yet beautiful and it seems so real
i-like-nutella #45
Tears of sadness ;_;
TheIceQueen #46
WOW!! Never have I read a story where all the main characters die!! Bravo bravo that was great!!!!
pipoomica
#47
TT^TT MY CREYS!!!! THE ENDING IS SO SAD! I NEED SOME TISSUES! SO SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ida_zumi #48
AHHHHHHHHHH KRIS DIED> OK THAT'S THE BEST FOR HIM T__T SUCH AN AWESOME STORY. /SOBBING HARD/
heyoo_sunshine
#49
Aww man, I knew fate wouldnt let Kris get this through, especially because Zico and Jungah died beforehand.
Kris' life was really meaningless without Jungah.
Such a great story and ending :)
xBo-minSassyx
#50
I have no words that can explain my amazement
This fic is unlike anyother fic, and its realistic no fairytale
U r amazing!!!! Author-nim jjang!!!!!!!!
batmaneatsrice
#51
he died..... -dies- </3 T^T
starry_diamonds #52
Gosh,all main 3 characters died in the end!I hope others survive!!But glad that Liang is killed by Kris!!
Author-nim,this story is really great!!I really really love it!!And i am going to read your new fanfic now!!keke!^^
maemeii
#53
I'm sorry for not commenting much on this story.

This one is so beautiful. It's tragic, yes, but not all stories need to have a happy ending, right? I'm glad to have read another well-written story from you. I can say that from the time I've started to read your fics until now, you've been growing and improving more as a writer.

Kudos, author-nim! ♥ Can't wait for the next fic :D
delikizzz #54
omfg poor kris. Man everyone died :( BUT THIS IS ONE OF M FAVORITE FANFICS EVER! Seriously! I loved it.
Cocoa12-6-5-15
#55
I could really feel all the tragedy... This was so amazing!! i really enjoy it reading it even when it made me really sad... this was deabak
eunJee25
#56
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
IT'S THE END AGAIN!!!!!!!!!
AND NOW! A NEW STORY AWAITS ME.
YOUR A GREAT AUTHOR YOU KNOW THAT. WE ALWAYS TELL YOU THAT. ^o^
SARANGHAE EONNIE~! CONTINUE MAKING SUCH AWESOME AND DAEBAK STORIES!!
NAMtika
#57
i'm crying to much on this fic OTL before i always giggled when read how kris teased jungah , how jungah endlessly blush when with kris , how cute and romantic their date:33
but near at the end i'm crying too much bc all the angst:'(
but seriously this is GREAT story , so much conflict are unpredictable:33
chocoinsane
#58
love was bitter
love was sweet
love was bittersweet
amazing how u had referred to the title
first of all, this was an amazing fanfic, and i'm glad i read it, and i'm sad it ended
well... lol, the 3 main died, u can't continue the story, unless you are talking about the afterlife
boog1e
#59
Oh my god.
I love the heartbreaking angst here. I've seen fics where one dies, okay, but all of them? This is something new. And I would know how it feels to even try to kill a character. You know it's just a freaking story but it feels like you're killing a real human being.
But wow. At first I didn't think I'd became so obsessed with this story, but I guess it's all your stories that have this magical way with people. It's a privilege to have you writing stories like this here. We're all so grateful.
I'll be waiting for the next story now~! I can't wait.
ainulhee
#60
cried.....thanks for making kris die too...i cant bear to see him alive wothout jungah by his side....a really sad ending T____T and also one of my fav story.....

thanks!


*move on to the sequel of BADASS OPPA!! yeay!!! got exo too!!*
handyhint #61
Omg it's so sad... Anyway thanks author for having such an awesome fanfic.
BigBang4eva06
#62
Wow it was a great story but also so sad that none of them survive I was hoping that Jungah and Kris would at least make it alive but no all of them die T^T
Off to read your next story
boboful
#63
yay they all died, i wonder if the others survived though :|
JAMLilover
#64
that a one of the most sad awesome end I've ever read!!!*sobs sobs* gahh!!! T^T who expected that the 3 character will die in the end...at first part of the story..I expected to have happy ending.. x( It never crossed my mind not even once that this will be the ending..totally not expected.. T__________T

you're such a good author , hands down! /(^.^)\
shinyiuhan
#65
omg. I really can't believe it ended like this :( I was hoping for a more dramatic reunion between Lay, Chen and Kris... TT.TT
callumhood #66
OMG SUCH A BEAUTIFUL AND TRAGIC STORY TT^TT I cried. Literally. SO SAD! At least Liang died :D so they sort of got what they wanted? ^^ Going to read your next fic!
painful--doubleyou
#67
Okay, so my previous comment...I exceed the limit >.< So this will be the last comment LOL :)

THANK YOU!
Thanks for making such a great OC. Thanks for making Block B so cool and funny (I laughed a lot :D). Thanks for giving Kris such a sweet, though initially cold, personality. Thanks for making me laugh and feel many emotions. Thanks for teaching me that I shouldn't take my family, friends, or lover for granted. Thanks for making such a heartfelt and stunning story that made me cry. Dbskgirl4ever, I LOVE YOU <3!
missgreeningreen
#68
make a sequel and let them be in the other world with powers. No? Okay. I was happy kris died too. Thank you author-nim for writing a kris fic. It's my first though.
vanessahuynh
#69
Whoaaaa I love this so much !!!
Thank you for making this awesome story, unni :)
When Zico died, there was no worth for Jungah to live. And when Jungah died, Kris really didnt have to live anymore :)
I would do the same, so yeah, totally love the way this story ended !'
B2ST43V3R #70
omg definitely a good fanfic!! although all the main characters died, it was actually good and i loved it! >< thank you for this fanfic! :D
AncientWriting #71
I loved it!!! <3 I'm glad to have read it :) You are one true inspiring amazing writer! I hope Kris Jungah and Zico the best. Finally Kris is with Jungah <3 WAH! NO IT'S TOo SAD! I LITERALLY CRIED! I'm just happy no one saw me cry haha. Thanks for the amazing story again <3
addictedtoyou
#72
kudos to u again dbskgirl4ever!! thanks for this wonderful story..

now im up for the next one ^^
painful--doubleyou
#73
And here is my final comment for you on this beautiful fanfic which starred Zico, Block B, Kris, EXO-M, and my now favorite OC ever, Han Jungah!

First, your writing has really improved! You can portay emotions even better now, and I got so angry, hurt, and happy while reading this story, more so than some of your other ones. I hope you're extremely proud of this story...because it's absolutely gorgeous <3

Second, my favorite OC ever is officially Jungah now. Though she is fake, ...I admire her in a way. I'm going to strive to be like her, sort of. Her dedication and loyalty to Zico AND Kris is very admirable. Her love for each man was sincere, even though it was two kinds of love. You made her a brilliant person who I love :)

Ahn/Han Jaehyo. This boy! From the very first remark about him and Jungah looking alike, I had a suspicious feeling. The more they said it, the more I was sure they were somehow related. In, like, the middle, I predicted they were siblings. I was right! Anyway, I also really loved Jaehyo. I'm happy he got over his jealousy/envy and accepted Jungah as his sister.

Kris! I LOVE THIS MAN! He was sweet, passionate, and just plain badass. He worked for what he wanted and he always showed Jungah sweet love. He even killed his old boss for the sake of Jungah's AND Zico's revenge. He is also admirable. Though he was initially cold, Jungah (and even Block B!) changed him for the better.

Last, but most certainly not least, Zico! I continually got frustrated with this man in the beginning & middle of this fic. I just wanted him to be happy with Jungah. But, nearing the end, I was glad he didn't confess until the seconds before his death. If he had confessed before, Kris would never had found happiness. I think Zico, for me, was the most valiant and admirable in this fanfiction. He sacrificed his LIFE for the girl he loved. But before that, he OPENLY gave Jungah to Kris because he knew she was truly happy with him. So sweet! I love him!
THANK YOU!