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Athena21 #1
Omg. This is some deep stuff. Bravo!!!!
Kim_Rina #2
awesome story author-nim (:
kpop_is_my_lifee
#3
Wah, they all die.. Such a amazing story. ^ ^
KimRiNa_Inspirit
#4
OMG T.T That's all? wat happens to the other members and how about block b?? 0.o wow ...
BUT STILL
BEST.ABSOLUTELY.PERFECT STORY!!!!! UHHHHHHH VERY SAD I CAN'T BELIEVE I CRIED!!!!! D':
kyuhyunoppa
#5
I am literally crying...such an amazing story
moonjiyoung #6
zico :'(

anw I love this story! :)
AzerSyaqeer #7
The other members reaction? lay? Chen? Tao? Xiumin? Luhan? What will they do?
Slytherinese #8
I...I...I...OMG!Such a good (eventhough its hearbreaking) ending
You never failed to surprise us author-nim <3
Kakellia
#9
I never reacted as much as I just did for any story. I was jumping, crying, making inhuman sounds, seriously, my family thought I was having a nightmare.

But OMFG this!! It is purely beautiful and painful, I was shocked of how great it was! every story you made are awesome, but this one stands out, I think. It is hard to make a good story, but even harder to make a sad ending (but it's probably because of my american culture, with fluffy Hollywoodian endings and all...)

By chance, you already started a new fanfic, and it is one of my favorite too, so I'll be able to wash away the hole in my heart maybe? TT^TT (I cried so much! It is a beautiful story, but my heart aches so freacking much!!)
ImBeautiful
#10
Wait. So....what happened to his friends? Lay? His best friend....did he even tried to fight?

Omg...all died hahahh
sadabanana
#11
I GO ON A VACATION FOR A WEEK AND THIS IS WHAT I COME BACK TO!??!?!?!? D':<
Beautiful story but I shall be raging over the ending forever D:<
dbskgirl4ever
#12
Thank you for reading~ ^^
zephyr_breeze #13
I'm crying!!! Why did you do this to me, my author!?
Anyway, thanks for the epic story. Full of emotions came out. I like it.
CuddlyTeddy #14
thanks for the AWESOME story!!! i loved it so far. But i heard there were some sad things happen in there.Hope it'll get better soon!
xxvanilla-ice #15
MY KRIS BABY! TT^TT amazing story, the end was so sad tho >:
MaiMai36
#16
Loved the story but I hate sad endings they make me cry so much T.T but that gif made up for it
b2uty4maknae
#17
Oh and anyone know what show the gif is from? If you do could you pm me?
b2uty4maknae
#18
This story was amazing! I loved it! You're such an awesome writer. Even though the ending was sad and everyone died it was wonderful. You made it sound like a very peaceful happything that they died. They are all out of pain and together even if its in the afterlife. Wonderful story!!!

Good job ^^
Stephanie1127
#19
Aww this was such a great fic. Haven't read something this good in a whileee. Once in a while, it's okay to have a sad ending :D Can't wait till your next fic!
chinGG996
#20
; A ;

everyone died~!!!! whyyyy?!?!?!?
Gyulia #21
Omg i didnt expect it to have a sad ending but it was beautiful :) i love this story soooo frikin much ;~; please write another story featuring exo ^o^
princessnoodle
#22
Kris, you are one hell of an awesome man.

Author-nim,
How can you do this to me? Why did you make me love him more? My bias list is ruined once again thanks to the EXO members.
mistydanes
#23
a very good story... thank you author-nim... thank you for writing a good bittersweet story I love so much...
SuperJunior_lov3r
#24
Author-nim you made me cry TT.TT
I love this story even though it was a sad ending, at least Kris, Jungah and Zico will be at peace :)
iCindy
#25
OMG, ALL THREE MAIN CHARACTERS DIED... O_O
LET'S CELEBRATE BECAUSE THIS STORY WAS SO GOOD, YET SO SAD (I HAD TO HIDE MY PUFFY EYES). T T GOOD LUCK ON THE SEQUEL! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS AMAZING STORY.

P.S. At least Liang died. /shot
theoutkast #26
wow this is probably my favorite, it was so dramatic and bittersweet! well done(:
_shelly
#27
I enjoyed your story author-nim, even though i cried like a baby for 9 whole chapters
water_lilly
#28
yep. gif did make me happier :)
00K88K
#29
Author-Nim: I rally enjoyed it. Te ending was so sad. No in had their Fate. Aigoo <\3
Anyways HWAITINg on your next Story ! ^^
00K88K
#30
Author-Nim: I rally enjoyed it. Te ending was so sad. No in had their Fate. Aigoo <\3
Anyways HWAITINg on your next Story ! ^^
wandijunseob
#31
enjoyed reading itt!!
LillTushie
#32
Omg!!!!!!!! This story is soooo frickin awesome!!~
I enjoyed every chapter and sentence.
The ending was.. Bittersweet lol
The ending was ironic. I never thought that they would all die: zico, jungah, and kris.
But that's one of the reasons why the story is so awesome!!!!
Meh. I love it sooo much!!!
Hope this story gets featured!!!
iloveSHINee03
#33
I love this story so much. OMG. Now i have nothing much to look forward to. :> I dunno why i love sad endings but i do. The ending hurt my heart but i loved it. That's one of my favorite quotes now "It's better to have loved and lost rather than to never have loved at all." Sigh. It's like KDramas, once it's finished it's hard to find something like it. You're the best writer ever! This story is so DAEBAK! <3 I'll definitely miss Kris & Jungah moments. :') asdkfjkj. Keep on writing awesome stories! Thank you so much for taking your time to write this and not abandoning us like others. Love it so much, saranghaeeeee ♥ :D
DreamyFoxie
#34
sad ~~ amazing ending.. three main character were dead.. MAIN !!! hear me ?? -sigh-
jeonghannah
#35
WHY DID YOU KILL THEM OFF???? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Oh well. It was your story, anyways. Can you consider to make a sequel of this, even though it might be impossible? Thank you! ^^ Now, I'm off to read the next fic! :D
immaKJlover
#36
Great Story author-nim :'D <3
gimmefood
#37
All 3 dead. ;A; my feels are gone. /sobbing an ocean/
minstah #38
He died TnT waiiiiiiiiiiii D:
That Kris gif at the end though<3
Bekah931215
#39
that was such a sad ending, but the fic was great as usual and I can't wait to read your new fic :D
meishboredd
#40
once again i cried reading your story.. T.T authornim i wanna tell you i love you and i hate you too T.T
Incandescency #41
so very tragic.
but the ending was extremely realistic; not everyone ends up alive or happy when they go through things...
you're very skilled at writing angst ^^
i cherish all your EXO stories! I shall go on to read your non-EXO ones...
wonwoo_biased
#42
T-T
It made me cry so much ;AAAA;
byeolliceekim
#43
The first *maybe* fanfic that made me cry so hard T_T

Chukkae author-nim
Caitlynlyn #44
Touching
tuanjung
#45
DAMNITUNNI! I love your action, but hate your angst... No one ends up happy! :'( gahhhhh. It was such a goo fix tho :$ anyways, awesome job on another (very depressing) fanfic! Time to read the new one!
hoshi_starkwon
#46
what is catastrophe??
merjhan
#47
omy Krease :'(
sad ending...they died.
ahehe the gif was .. hot xD
eLementAndNewclear
#48
That was so sad TT__TT
BUT, it was SO SO good *O*
Shimiiee
#49
EVERYONE DIED.
Oh well the GIF was furqing hot so I think it's happy in the END. Jk lol -.-'

I reaaaaaaaaally loved this. Though the ending was sad, unbearable, sorrowful and all the sad words I love this plot !
iaminfinite8
#50
Just finished reading.. I don't know what I'm feeling right now.. Mostly sad because they all had to die. :( My thoughts are still jumbled now because of the gif above. It's distracting my sorrow and grief TT^TT

But still.. THANK YOU FOR SHARING THIS:D
KpopLuver4ever
#51
Tooo much sadness </3 So sad all three of them died T___T
kyulizhae27 #52
Lol~ yehey anyways they're back together again anyways~!
TheAwesomeWise #53
WHY YOU MAKE PEOPLE I LOVE DIE!! IF YOU SEND KRIS, ZICO AND JUNGAH TO HELL, LIANG WILL BE THERE TO HURT THEM! WAHHHH! Good story, though
angelzs2
#54
Apparently its hard to believe that I cry. But with your story, I cried so easily... TT
summerysensibility #55
well, me.

good story author-nim. it was really well written, besides the obvious fact of how i want to kill myself now -_-

continue good writing<3
FaceOfAphrodite
#56
This story is really beautiful. You're such a great author. Even though they all died, the story is still daebak. I'll be waiting for your stories again. =)
KpopGirlForever
#57
i'm weeping right now. :"(
Baby-Panda
#58
:(((((((( Your'e such a great author. you made me cry with two of your stories :(((( You are so DAEBAK AUTHORNIM! I salute you! :) Thank you for this wonderful story :)
dawnover
#59
The story was so sadT_T Awesome story btw , now i finally understand the title<3 Thank you for writing such a nice story :D
val-cassies
#60
Awesome story!!!Authornim! All your stories are DAEBAK!!!∩__∩♥
TtotheKtotheT
#61
Awh, Komawo for the Gif. :) That was hard to take. *sigh*
b2uty_inspirit_angel #62
ggod job!!! omygosh! u are so awesome! waiting for ur next story!
xxkpopxx #63
T.T why did they have to die?
edrisyw
#64
be happy in hell or heaven for three of you :" ..
Caitlynlyn #65
Thanks for the wonderful story ^^
ebomtaro #66
holy
they all died
what
but... but but but this was still sooooo GOOD! omfg i can't even rn, i'm not sure how to feel because this was such an incredible story and i actually love it so much but... they all died
well damn, love sure is bittersweet OTL
omg no but this was seriously a really, really great story and even though the ending was sad, it was still so beautiful T^T
I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE OF YOUR STORIES~ FIGHTING!!!
Armablakken
#67
When I was reading this story, it felt as though I was reading an actual book. Everything just flowed so naturally. Every one of your fics is like this. Now I will patiently wait for your comeback.
tine96
#68
waaaaahhhh T_T awesome story... Great job author-nim :')
xtelle #69
Aww~ though Zico, Jungah and Kris died, the story's still beautiful~
zka0624
#70
omg my eyes.... i've been crying like akdgsywigyetr T____T i still can't believe all of them died.......... this is the best angst story i ever read, i swear!

anyway, i'm waiting for your next fic! teheeee <3
candyforlove
#71
wow . this fanfic has a really deep impact . i feel like i personally know Zico, Jungah and Kris . As i read the story, Zico, Jungah and Kris became my friends . When they died, i felt that i lost three people in my life . Thank you for writing such an awesome story . The last paragraph of the last chapter really has a meaning . It took me a moment to re-read it again and reflect on the meaning .

FIGHTING DBSKGIRL4EVER ! :)
samarkatloi
#72
The best bittersweet love story ;')
xiummie
#73
there's a river here now
RonySweety #74
Beautiful story even though all main characters died T_T
Will miss it :)
Tears in my eyes~
purplefreak #75
Fuuuu this story is amazing!!!
930628_
#76
Andwae..
This is alr the end..
And all 3 of them died.. )':
Holdm3up
#77
I'll miss this story..... But I loved the ending anyway <3
JumgJumg
#78
I LOVE THIS.
dragonmafia #79
BUT I LOVE THE SAD ENDING. THIS IS THR FIRS ANGST STORY I LOVED. BEFORE I READ THIS STORY I REALLY HATE BAD ENDING OMG....
bubbly-lolli #80
I realllllllllyy loved your story!! It was beautiful even if it ended sadly!!! T^T
I crieed at the end :'(
<3
Sooyong #81
now. . .i'm satisfied. .
If kris have to live alone, it will be unfair.. .
MiyaChan
#82
whoa...Such a tragdey ending, yet it was bittersweet.
Everything kept my attention and I was blew away at the end, from the beginning 'till the ending, it was amazing.
LovelyInspirit
#83
Great story ! Loved it and the gif at the end ~ kyaaa, Kris is so hawt hehe, thankyou for writing this story ! 고마워 ^_~
janesarang03
#84
I really love the story but the ending totally broke my heart. GOOOOOOOSH~ great job btw! :))

on to the next story! KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!! XDD
C_Kel04 #85
Awesome!
An unexpected ending for me ^^
Good job!
Keep it up :)
ydlmdy #86
such a great story.
although i hated how it ended, it was written beautifully.
Lovebias1806_
#87
Haish. Ohgod. I read this in school and everyone thought i went crazy. This story is my faveeee and it's soooo sad all 3 of them died :( How will EXO-M live w/o their duizhang now. LOL. I was sooo glad when Tao went to shoot that guy and help Kris. Atleast Lay changed at the last minute and helped. I really loved all those JungRis moments. i think i'm gonna read this again. Just to relive this story. :') great ending.<3
kim_chaerin #88
huuuuuuuu even its sad ending.. but im satisfied with the characters ^^ u made kris looked so hott!
_ISlapYouAh_ #89
haizz.. all died in the end. but i still love ur story!:D
oasis_b2uty
#90
the ending is beautiful , it's just..so beautiful T_T
LovelyInspirit
#91
SOOOOOO sad!! you made Kris die by himself ! >.< anyways loved it :))