Comments: Lost in Transit (Tao's Version)

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-dem0ns #1
WOW
hannibalfreak #2
Chapter 1: So much of feels... '-'
SiaShin
#3
Chapter 1: crying taoooo, oh the feels (つД`)ノ that poor scared baby panda ;^; you silly thing, kriseu would never forget his maknae~ HA, in the end dui has to buy him stuff, i just love Tao, hes so speshurr(^ω^)
happybubblelove
#4
Oh my goodness, this was absolutely adorable.
It totally being lost and thinking that no one's looking for you... ><
Poor baby Tao... Duizhang needs to watch his didi more carefully!
Awesome story! :)
Futuristic #5
This was adorable, I really liked it! I just thought that maybe you should look through the second half of this, because there are more mistakes in the second half and also, you shift a little between first and second person. Just thought I'd let you know ^^
Sunnysideofcookies
#6
This was so cute~
I know how it feels to be lost, so I totally understand Tao
I also know how it feels to lose someone so I understand Kris xD
I'm gonna go stalk your other stories now ^.^
MMachine
#7
Aww Tao come to asmi I won't leave you alone (gets murdered by Kris) anyways this story was short and sweet and perfect. I should stop grinning xD
OblivionOfMisery
#8
Do not leave your children unattended. XD
Like what happened in Disneyland. Haha.
--inspiritic
#9
Aww baby Tao was terrified!! Who wouldn't be but thankfully kris saved him.
so4fty #10
Ould you do a sequel with all the members' reactions
angelsmiles
#11
Awww! poor baby Tao! That would be scary!!
morninginmarch #12
nawww tao was so cute when he was being all angry and kris was so sweet <3