Chapter 30: WHAT A PLOT TWIST...........im speechless. There's too many plot twists in your story, and I am not even that close to the end--- how how how. Omg, I need to read faster or else I will die in questions
Chapter 16: WOW. JUST WOW. Now it's getting a lot clearer about the line she has crossed by that love confession.
That photoshoot must have felt weird too then, ugh.
Chapter 13: what is going on..........i suddenly feel lost. Or is this indeed the purpose? Because i dont know what should i do after learning the truth.......i thought??? Omg, guess i need to keep reading
Chapter 12: goosebumps!!! I had goosebumps all over my arms when i read this. Seriously, this game is scary. If i ever in that game, i probably would just stick to the police or get me a bodyguard or something that could protect me.
Chapter 8: I KNEW IT!!!!! IT'S IM YOONA RITEEEE?
all right since it's too early to settle on one person, ill let myself learn more as i read more.
This story is so interesting!
Chapter 7: Why do i feel like Yoona is the one who did all this? There's something weird about her that made me think that she is the "designated winner" or the "uninvited member".
This Fanfic has always been the story of my dreams. Its twisted and so dark. I always look back and read it for every compelling and intriguing detail. Amazing job!
I actually remember reading this 2 or 3 or even 4 years ago. It's been a while.
I don't remember precisely how each chapter goes but from what I remember, it involves a lot of death lol. I also recall how I really like the mystery and suspense that you conveyed in the story. :)
I like this story a lot and I feel like you did a really good job in closing the end. I respect you a lot cause you manage to write some cruel scenes and a whole lot of death. It was a fun ride.
I stumbled back to this story accidently and I gave an upvote tho I only added one number to it lel.
Keep up the good work. I'm not the only people supporting you. :D
i would pay good money to own this fic in book form.
i would volunteer as an editor. i would donate to have it published if it ever came to that. i would do so many things for this story because i keep coming back to read it and it's been several years since i first found it.
i wish i could erase the memory of me reading this so i could read it all over again and experience it all from scratch.
yeah um if you're ever bored and don't know what to do consider publishing der marchenclub because all the fans will come back for it and will be in tears. jUst puttin' this out there. just an extra thought.
Chapter 43: Rated M for cursing, spoilers, and a hell of a rant. I'm sorry because I'm PMS-ing right now and both this and the previous chapter really gave me a ing hit on the head. None of this is intended to be serious (HAH, OF COURSE SOME ARE); although this comment is just literally me expressing my ed-up feelings and explaining how ing great and cruel you are.
Dear Author,
I'm really ing sorry if this is years late and that my late- attitude is not having any of this plot-twist that scarred my nearly-ended 2017.
So, to start it off. Stephanie Young Hwang is my bias.
And you see, reading her die in such an early chapter wasn't heartbreaking at all.
It was soul-crushening.
(YES, I'M ING MAKING UP WORDS BECAUSE I'M TOO FED UP WITH THESE LIES.)
Not to mention she was rarely mentioned.
And treated badly.
But nevertheless, it was a fanfiction that was based around Jessica so I didn't mind. I was purely mentally prepared and ready that this fanfic was based on the tags above. Truthfully, I just ended up on this mind-blowing fanfic (both praising and hating on you) because I was so desperate for more SiFany fanfiction.
BUT OH NO
I WASN'T READY FOR THIS .
NU-UH
NOT EVER
I WASN'T ING MADE UP FOR THIS.
OKay, I mIGHt bE An oVErrEaCTiNG
yes i know.
BUT I-II-I-III---IIII---I
I JUST CAN'T
CAN'T ING BELIEVE THIS IS MY PLOT TWIST OF 2017
CAN'T BELIEVE SHE'S ALIVE
CAN'T BELIEVE SHE'S MOST PROBABLY OUT THERE AND NOW SHE'S THE VILLAIN.
Author-ssi, WHY do you have to do this me ;-;
I know you apologized on this matter, saying you were not afraid to be cruel and destroy your OTPs (including mine)
BUT I DIDN'T READ ANYTHING ABOUT MAKING PEOPLE REGRET AND THINK ABOUT THEIR LIFE CHOICES??????
Okay, this fanfiction is deemed as the best ing fanfiction I've ever read (along with Black Gold and The Silver Dragons) (WHiCH AREn'T tHIS EvIL BTW) Like seriously, the courage you muster up to kill off main characters in such a precise and thought-out way was brilliant! The wording, the feelings put out in each word... It was not merely a bunch of letter put out together; it was a scene playing out in my mind, as if it was real and it was absolutely happening right before my eyes.
Ah - yes - THAT.
DO YOU ALSO KNOW HOW MUCH I SQUIRM IN MY BED ALONE AFRAID SOMEONE'S GOING TO ING RIP OFF MY FEET.
AND AS IF SOMEONE WAS STALKING ME WHEN I TAKE A BATH.
AND AS IF I WAS ABOUT TO DIE WITH A STAB IN THE KNIFE WHENEVER I READ THIS.
UGH
But most of all, my all-time favorite about this book is none other than
(DRUM ROLL PLEASE!!!)
the suspense.
It was simply that.
I could not stop turning the chapters, no matter how much my mom yells at me for being an incompetent child who does nothing than to stare at the bright screen of the device; no matter how much my dad pleads me to take a bath because I ing stink; and no matter how many hours of sleep I lose just because of this masterpiece.
You, author, have my ing respect. I know the respect of a moody teenage girl might not affect you at any cost but I am just here to both stay, rant, reconsider my life choices for the second ing time - and praising you...
(But be clear I'm only exaggerating the pure shock I am dealing)
You Author-ssi, have a magnificent mind, a hand of gold, the courage to kill, but most importantly - the heart.
That no matter how many people you "kill"
How many cliff hangers you place
You still have everything to continue this one heck of a roller coaster ride.
Kudos to you, author-ssi.
Kudos to you.
Sincerely,
This torn reader :)
P.S: I hope you enjoyed reading my nonsense comment. Really, I just let my hand hover over the keyboard and type things out. I have no intention of editing it. I just clearly want to express my thoughts on how good you are. Of course, I'm still in a mild state of shock (if you do consider this mild, though) although the "pain" I expressed earlier was just for the sake of exaggerating and making this comment more comedic (I guess) (I have no sense of humor, I'm sorry ;-;) I have no grudges against you (If you looked at it that way) and once again, this comment was literally a praise of your work. I don't know how many times I could tell you "a job well done" but trust me, you deserve it.
P.P.S: Keep on writing Super Gen fics! PLEASE! I'M DYING ;-; I DON'T CARE IF IT'S DARK! I DON'T CARE IF ALL OF THEM DIE! I WILL READ IT. UPVOTE IT. GIVE IT A LIKE. I DON'T CARE. JUST PLEASEEE PLEASEEEE PRETTY PLEASSEEEE
Found out we're from the same country, but I'll go with English since it feels more comfortable to use for this.
(For all of you who haven't finished the fic, this comment is a major spoiler, so avoid reading if you don't want any spoiler)
I just spent three days, barely living my life properly, to read this fic from the beginning to the end.
This is one of the most original, unique and amazing story I've ever read in general, including all the classic literature and commercial novels I love.
You traumatize me, broke my heart and horrified me. SNSD is my most favorite girlband ever. I would like others, but the new ones will never compare to SNSD for me. And to read my biases killed cruelly one by one is like reading a nightmare.
But above all, I think my heart broke most painfully when you still kill Sica in the end. Which, on further consideration, actually fits this story better. Peaceful endings doesn't click well with the whole theme (I know, but TT______TT)
Based on my reaction, you have successfully wrote this one. You're really one of the most genius author I've ever read in my entire life, which is really something since I love to read and I really have read a lot. I write fanfics too, and my readers told me that I am a heartbreaker, but you break my heart worse than I ever did to my writers, I guess.
All in all, congratulations to you. This is an epic piece of fiction that I will remember for a long, long time. And when people ask me (they don't have to ask, really, I'm going to promote this fic to everyone who would listen) I will recommend them to read this fic.
I'm a fan and will definitely read all your other fics.
Thank you for your hard work in creating this fic. You are indeed one of a kind.
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