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kpopluver3
#1
Chapter 14: just rereading this story for like i dont even how many times i read this. anyway just felt like rereading it again and just again realize how beautiful the writing is and just wanted you to know i appreciate this work of art. anyway cant wait to hear from you soon with good news like an update. cant wait to see how the other member of the gang will react upon futher contact with gyeowool and hopefully we can know more about her history and background. it seemed like that memory of her being stuck in the mental hospital from her middle school year to her high school year was very traumatic. that a very close friend of her, zelo, had passed away and it seems she had left him like how she had left jimin or he just left? anyway im really curious about that background and hopefully with more updates those things will be made clearer. anyway can't wait for your update and good luck with you real life endeavors because i know how busy real life commitment can make us. can't wait to hear from you soon<3
whimsyvkook #2
will read! ^^
makeupyourmind #3
Chapter 14: loving the banter between gyeowool and jimin! but imagining hoseok limping... its so sad and must be hard for jimin to see. you've very good and pulling in the fluff and then pulling out the angst.
makeupyourmind #4
Chapter 13: i can feel gyeowool's frustration. she's wants to comfort jimin but she doesn't know how to. the helplessness in that is something i can relate to. when you know someone is in pain but you feel like there is nothing you can say to help them.
great chapter :) i liked the analogy about the moon, its cycles and how that relates to the circle of life.
RivenLito #5
YOO WAH
Jaslynn #6
Chapter 13: I guess it is a happier chapter :/
QueenbeeTaeyeon #7
Nice title!
makeupyourmind #8
Chapter 12: My heart hurts! My chest hurts! Everything hurts!! Its so unlucky they ended up where they r now. Im scared to know how taehyung is doing....
Jaslynn #9
Chapter 11: Omg nooo??He is angry ? at Joonie ?I’m glad our sunshine is still himself while I hope Jin feels back to himself soon. Hope she can help heal the boys :)
makeupyourmind #10
Chapter 11: reunion!!! yay! but even reading it made me feel nervous with all the awkward tension between them. the 'whats this unexpected romance angst' made me laugh haha. i hope the gang become close again!
Jaslynn #11
Chapter 10: Waaah Mr Bang he's adorable ^.^
makeupyourmind #12
Chapter 10: I like how that in the process of Gyeowool getting to know Jimin better, she has slowly begun to change the way she interacts with other ghosts.
also the firefighter ghost's story is so sad :( the way he just accepts his fate and only waiting to see his baby
interesting concept with the calling of the light! i like it :)
makeupyourmind #13
Chapter 9: yes!!!! another update!! i feel like i picked a good time to start this story haha.
and it was car accident!! i really hope that Taehyung and Jungkook are ok >___<
I just feel sad that all this connection between Jimin and Gyeowool, like its more of a platonic/friends bond to me than anything romantic, is going to end one day once Jimin fulfils his wish and leaves T_____T