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FreshFromCrewSatan #1
Congratulations on the feature (^o^)
SoItellhersweetlies
#2
I read this a while back. its really good congrats!
Insight_stv
#3
Chapter 9: Yaaaay! Confession time :))))))))))
oceanscapes #4
the gif in the foreword is telling me to read this xD
vronvron
#5
Chapter 10: i liked this quite a bit ^^ it was a bit of a rollercoaster at times, but I liked the way things ended :D
seul-luvie #6
congrats on the feature!!
kyutesooo #7
Congrats!
anonymous_exol
#8
Chapter 10: He's soft n nervous cuz of her
baekyeyeliner #9
Chapter 10: ahhh this was so good!!!! im glad it was featured cuz this is such an amazing story!!! the bonus chapeter meks this story ten times better and cute hehe i love oh sehun's perdonality in this so stoic but still got that cold and protective side of him hehe
Exomyheart
#10
Chapter 10: I finally finished reading!!!It was so good!!Probably one of the best stories l have ever read!!
Peripatetic
#11
The poster is stunning
genielogy12
#12
Chapter 10: Chapter 10: My favorite mobster plot so far. Gosh authornim really did well with this. I'm really happy to read such a brillant work of you, authornim. Thank you for putting lots of elements to your work. I love the story! It was a miss that it was already completed. But then Im hoping for more of your work authornim! Thank you again and more ffs to comeee!
Brekhna
#13
Chapter 10: Amazing! !!!
Graylu #14
Chapter 10: Another sequel story pleaseee i love ittt sooo muchu i swear
aarya93
#15
Chapter 10: Loved this story, usually, I don't read oc, but this one I liked!
Star-of-chaos
#16
Good story.
KarraAriana
#17
Chapter 10: Oh my... i really really love this story... i felt like reading a book. Wow you're an amazing author i must say. This is so well written and this deserved so much loveesssss ❤❤
pagkinang
#18
Chapter 10: wow. just wow. in 10 chapters, it covered almost everything! (although i wanted to see [more] sehun in action, i understand it revolves around sehun and aya's problem ft. ara getting affected) nevertheless, i'm really satisfied with it and it gives me TONS of feels especially when the whole murder was done T___T i thought it would be the end for the possibility of sehun and ara being together but NO T__T i'm glad chapter 8 to the barcelona chapter is there to satisfy my thirst for hunra moments. heh.

it was also written so good i had so much fun reading it (esp to the part when sehun indirectly confessed his feelings LOL) <33 hope to read more stories from you. i really love this one :D