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PurpleRoseYeri
#1
Chapter 9: This chapter was somewhat sweet, having Sehun and Ara talk about their feelings quite violently but sincerely.

Who would have thought that kidnapping the wrong sister could lead to such turn of the events.
PurpleRoseYeri
#2
Chapter 8: She has met Sehun after two years of no contact, she still thinks of him and is more than willing to be his secretary just to be close with him and to get away from Luhan, of course.
PurpleRoseYeri
#3
Chapter 7: A little bit ironic how Sehun has to remind Ara that he is human too.

Ara has fallen for his charms or has been affected by Sehun. I mean, the whole events happened in two days, the girl needs some time to rest and get her mind back in order.
PurpleRoseYeri
#4
Chapter 6: Aya had done it herself. Maybe if she was nicer to her sister or to anyone else and wiser to not mess with the Mafia, maybe she and Alex would be alive.

Oh well, she got the ending she deserved.
PurpleRoseYeri
#5
Chapter 5: Lia is a s dangerous as the rest of them.

Ara doesn't have much time. Good thing she was sketchy of the whole car deal. These people can think of anything.
PurpleRoseYeri
#6
Chapter 4: Ara has some guts to say that to Sehun. Sehun seems to have low temper.

Even though they may very criminals, they have some himan decency to offer Ara a bathrobe and some expensive food.

Ara must be going through a turmoil of emotions. All abandoned by her sister and thrown in Sehun's arms like some rag doll.

I sure hope she makes it out alive.
PurpleRoseYeri
#7
Chapter 3: Okay, Sehun isn't as dumb as my first impression told me.

But he still is dangerous. what if Ara has no clue about Aya's whereabouts or doesn't want to betray her sister? No one wants to die.
PurpleRoseYeri
#8
Chapter 2: They consider themselves to be quite intelligent and dangerous but none of them noticed Ara waking up and overhearing important information.

Maybe Lia and the other woman will notice Ara has waken up. The stress she must be experiencing will make it hard to keep still and calm.
PurpleRoseYeri
#9
Chapter 1: Ara has been mistaken as Aya. They are total opposites, one seemingly nice and caring while the other messes with the wrong type of people.

Sehun and Aya probably didn't discuss their families for him to know that she has a twin or he knows and doesn't really care.

Ara's life is about to change 180°.
mizzinformation #10
Chapter 9: Still one of my faves. I re-read this from time to time. Thanks for writing this!
saltymuffin
#11
I keep coming back here cause i enjoyed it so much❤️❤️ i really love ara's characterr..
thankyoui:))
inufan66 #12
Chapter 9: Loved this story! I loved that Sehun really understood her character and wanted the best for her the entire time. It was really sweet to see his own weird way of loving her and how they both couldn't get over each other and ended up together in the end. The bonus was definitely satisfying. I hate when things are left open for me to wonder about lol
cheonchoni
#13
Chapter 9: Im not sure why i was laughing at the end of the story lol. Maybe because everything is just so shocking and like BAM! I like your story because Ara's reaction is realistic and how everyone treated her at first is very true too. Many similar story(gangau and mobau mostly) has a too nice characters and I HATE IT. Because theyre criminals there is no way they would be nice like that. It annoys me so much. So good job at making the story almost believable *thumbs up*
Dyoooo
#14
Chapter 9: I dont know if I ever commented but this is really one of the best things ever!!
probably my third time reading and it still amazes me
tonnettie
#15
Chapter 9: Sehun and feelings hahaha! Great story!
tonnettie
#16
Chapter 2: Was that Kiko Mizuhara?( whatever the spelling of her last name) It’s the first time in years I saw her. ( cause I’m a Daragon fan and I bear grudges)
polyeol
#17
Chapter 1: Reading this for 1234567895115 times already